tomorrow's plan (need help please)

Question

hi everyone!

I was writting some stuff I want to post in my hi5. And I need if it's possible some corrections, I'm not so sure if I wrote my "speech" properly.

so, here it is. Thanks in advance!

"I WON'T be here (in my house) no matter if I have to go out alone and have nothing to do.

Well I'm not so sure about it, but I DO NOT WANT TO BE HERE, that's a fact.

I want to see all my friends together... -impossible thing, unfortunately, cause some of you hate each other (and I hate that)-

I want balloons all over my bedroom or my bed..

I want my children with me.

Answer 1

"I WON'T be here (in my house) no matter if I have to go out alone and have nothing to do.

Well I'm not so sure about it, but I DO NOT WANT TO BE HERE, that's a fact.

I want to see all my friends together... -impossible thing, unfortunately, cause some of you hate each other (and I hate that)-

I want balloons all over my bedroom or my bed..

I want to have my children with me.

I want to meet my lost nephew or niece Why my lost nephew'?
I want to eat barbecue for breakfast.

I want to eat ice-cream all day long.

I want to go to the "gotcha".

Answer 2

HI pasa bolita, he puesto mis sugerencias en negrita.

Answer 3

oh, Thank you so much!

my lost nephew... is just I think my brother have a kid and he is hiding it, but I'm really sure he has a kid

anyway

Thank you again

Answer 4

is it correct p.d.? or it should be p.s.'

Answer 5

You could say:

the nephew or niece I have never met

Answer 6

so, it will be:

I want to meet the nephew or niece I have never met'

Answer 7

Yes, that's it.

Certainly sounds much better than lost nephew, as you have never met him before, so he is not really lost but unknown to you.

saludos

Answer 8

oh, you're right!

Thank you!