Dedicatoria
Hi everyone! I need help on the vocabulary and grammar of dedicating a coloring book in both English and Spanish. I don't want to give it away so there are some blanks. Thanks so much!
Hola a todos! Necesito ayuda en la dedicatoria de un libro de colorear. Muchísimas gracias!
Dedication: This coloring book is dedicated to the children of (the organization) and to the many volunteers who have helped change their world. Heartfelt thanks to all the donors who supported my project for (the organization), including the creation and copying of this coloring book.
Dedicatoria: Este libro de colorear se dedica a los niños de (la organización) y a los numerosos voluntarios que han ayudado a cambiar su mundo. Gracias de corazón [help me rephrase this please!] a todos los donantes que han apoyado mi proyecto para (la organización), incluyendo la creación y la copia de este libro de colorear.
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Looks pretty good...a few minor things i noticed:
Dedication: This coloring book is dedicated to the children of (the organization) and to the many volunteers who have helped change their world. Heartfelt thanks to all the donors who have supported my project for (the organization), including the creation and copying of this coloring book.
**might want to take out my and replace it with this or the ...it makes it very self focused taking away from the organization, but thats your choice its gramatically fine
Dedicatoria: Este libro de colorear se dedica a los niños de (la organización) y a los voluntarios que han ayudado a cambiar su mundo. Muchas Gracias de todo el corazón a cada donor que ha apoyado a hacer este proyecto posible para (la organización), incluyendo la creación remove and copying de este libro de colorear.
I hope that helps a bit
The Spanish looks pretty good to me, but of course you should see what a native speaker has to say about this.
With regards to "Grazias de corazón", you might try:
Gracias con todo mi corazón
Sounds like a great project!
J
