Please proofread this paragraph [Edited]
Thanks you so much to those who helped me ![]()
3 Answers
que era el babé = bebé
los niños creen que los Reyes Magos los dan a ellos = you need to take out the 'los niños, "creen que los...."
These should get you started and I will look at it again in a bit!
Very goo draft!! Your Spanish is good ![]()
Es después de los 12 días de la Navidad.
Hoy día, niños reciben regalos de sus padres
Sin embargo, los niños creen que los Reyes Magos se los dan a ellos.
I don't understand why you keep switching back and forth between the impersonal and using ellos (los niños).
Ellos fueron el oro, la mirra y el incienso.
Why not say "Estos eran oro, mirra, e incienso" I think this sound better than "ellos" which could be confused with "los Reyes Magos."
or: "con tres regalos: oro, mirra e incienso."
Also, take out the "ellos" when referring to the children; simply conjugate the verb. ![]()
I am not always correct, but I am close. Somebody will correct me if I am wrong!
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