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Need proofreading help please

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I am trying to say:

You can see this reality of the proverb in our school

I translated this as:

Te puede ve esta realidad de un proverbio en nuestra escuela

I'm not sure if this is correct though.

I am trying to say:

I believe that my sports friends are more crazy (crazier) than my best friends because of the friends that they have.

I translated this as:

Creo que mis amigas en mis deportes son más locas que mis mejores amigas porque de los amigas que ellos tienen

I'm not sure if this is correct, especially the "than" and the "because of"

Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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updated Oct 6, 2009
posted by mmfhlax18

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Se puede ver la realidad de este proverbio en nuestra escuela. or Se ve la realidad de este proverbio...

Creo que mis amigas deportivas sean más locas que mis mejores amigas como resulta de las amigas que tengan.

(belief (creo que ) requires subjunctive, as does conjecture)

I'm not a native speaker but I've spent time abroad and with native speakers in the US while teaching Spanish for almost 20 years. Buena suerte!

updated Oct 6, 2009
posted by michelevermont