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So - here is a story for us. Each person can write a new section, until we have a whole story!

Érase una vez, había un joven muy pobre, cuyo mayor tesoro era un gato blanco hermoso, llamado Ramon.

Once upon a time, there was a very poor young man, whose greatest treasure was a beautiful white cat, called Ramon.

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updated Aug 1, 2013
edited by rac1
posted by togtog
I have changed your category to, "Games." Do you have someone to correct? - rac1, Jul 17, 2013
This is a great idea! - Findy, Jul 17, 2013
Good idea togtog, let's have some fun! - annierats, Jul 18, 2013
Gekko had one going for months it was fabulous . - ray76, Jul 19, 2013
Dear rac - no, I don't have anyone to correct. Is there a way to get someone? - togtog, Jul 20, 2013

51 Answers

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Muerta , no él no era muerta ,pero borracha de nuevo.

Mientras estaban hablando , Ramón escapado en su moto.

Así ramón era libre a robar y pillaje una vez más.

¿Hay es un persona que es fuerte basta para detener Ramón ?


Dead , no he is not dead , he was drunk again ,

while they were talking Ramon escaped on his motor bike.

So Ramon was free to rob and pillage once more.

Is there nobody who is strong enough to stop Ramon ?

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updated Jul 30, 2013
edited by ray76
posted by ray76
We will pray for someone Ray - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
He was dead drunk? - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
He is a mess when he gets like that - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
I know the feeling. - ray76, Jul 26, 2013
No not you, Ray, Ramon there is a difference - pmikan-pam, Jul 30, 2013
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Esto era un área en la que Felipe era el experto. Mostró que hacer los otros dos, pero Ramón no estaba prestando atención correctamente.

Now this was an area in which Filipe was the expert. He showed the other two what to do, but Ramon really wasn't paying attention properly.

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updated Jul 30, 2013
posted by togtog
:-) Good one - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
It's hard to teach Ramon - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
maybe he's meditating again. - annierats, Jul 26, 2013
Getting a sun bath perhaps - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013
no,he's just really pouring it on. - heliotropeman, Jul 26, 2013
He is very good at it, must have had lots of practice. - pmikan-pam, Jul 30, 2013
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The cats went to the lake to get some fish. The cats ate the fish and they said.... Mum!

Los gatos fueron al lago. Los gatos comieron el pescado.

updated Jul 30, 2013
posted by 0080b918
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Poor, poor Ramon, he has been hallucinating from the alcohol withdrawals. He thinks he is seeing double cats, double fish and he hasn't eaten in a long time. Pobres, los pobres, Ramon el ha estado alucinando de ritiradas de alcohol. cree que ve dos veces. Doble gatos pescado doble y no ha comido en mucho tiempo.

updated Jul 30, 2013
posted by pmikan-pam
Eye'd say he was seeing triple :0 - 0095ca4c, Jul 29, 2013
Good eye'd say that three! - pmikan-pam, Jul 29, 2013
jaj I miss you on the weekends amiga. - 0095ca4c, Jul 29, 2013
Thanks amiga, I miss you too, but I know that you are busy hard at work :-) - pmikan-pam, Jul 29, 2013
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Sin embargo, cuando Ramón vio a los gemelos, no estaba tan seguro acerca de las habilidades del oculista.

However, when Ramon saw the twins, he wasn't so sure about the eye doctor's abilities.

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updated Jul 29, 2013
posted by togtog
Oh togtog, this optrician is not to be trusted.. - annierats, Jul 27, 2013
Maybe all his drinking has taken a toll? - pmikan-pam, Jul 29, 2013
finding a pair of glasses will be difficult. - 0095ca4c, Jul 29, 2013
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Sí ,es difícil disfrazar los ojos azules,pero un medico del ojos tuvo contactos que funciona.Yes,it is difficult to disguise blue eyes,but an eye doctor had contacts that worked.!

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updated Jul 29, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
That looks bad and scary helio! - pmikan-pam, Jul 29, 2013
jaja....what a picture. - 0095ca4c, Jul 29, 2013
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En el mapa había una X que marcaba la posición del tesoro enterrado. Por mala fortuna, cuando llegaron al sitio donde debiera haber sido el tesoro enterrado , se dieron cuenta que ahora había un hypermercado enorme en la posición de la X.

On the map there was a cross marking the place where the treasure was buried. Unfortunatly, when they arrived at the site where the buried treasure ought to have been, they discovered that now there was a gigant supermarket on top of the X.

updated Jul 27, 2013
posted by annierats
Please imagine the supermarket, they all look the same.. - annierats, Jul 25, 2013
Yes but this one was the " Cats whiskers". - ray76, Jul 25, 2013
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It was a holistic pet store, and they enjoyed a suppliment called "The Happpy Traveler". Era una tienda de mascotas, holistica, y disfrutaraon de un suplemento llamado "The Happy Traveler".

updated Jul 27, 2013
posted by pmikan-pam
Yes indeed it was the cats whiskers. jaja - pmikan-pam, Jul 25, 2013
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La tienda debe que destruir. Necesitan un bulldozer y esto se cuestan dinero,pues vuelvan a mendigando para ellos. The store would have to be destroyed. They needed a bulldozer and this would cost money so back to begging for them.

man ,dog and cat photo: Music man with cat and dog DSCF2579.jpg

updated Jul 27, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
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- Tengo que parar de beber tanto Ron' - pensamiento a Ramon, confundido en cuanto a lo que era realidad y lo que era un sueño. Él miaue pedidos de Digger y Felipe al hombro sus espadas como usó el mapa para dirigirlos a la ubicación correcta. Avanzó hacia adelante a través de la exuberante paisaje, con un sentido de propósito, ahora que tenían Ramón para dirigirlos y ahora que las drogas habían desaparecido.

"I must stop drinking so much rum" thought Ramon, confused as to what was reality and what was a dream. He miowed orders at Digger and Felipe to shoulder their spades as he used the map to direct them to the right location. They strode forward through lush countryside, with a sense of purpose, now that they had Ramon to direct them and now that the drugs had worn off.

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updated Jul 25, 2013
edited by togtog
posted by togtog
Good recovery. - heliotropeman, Jul 25, 2013
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Felipe llegó en el rato de tiempo asiendo Ramón y activo el otro abilidad que Ramón tiene.Felipe arrived in the nick of time grabbing up Ramón and activating another special skill Ramón has.

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updated Jul 24, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
Wow, who knew? - pmikan-pam, Jul 24, 2013
Dear God, I didn't know that, I had asleepless night, with worry.. - annierats, Jul 24, 2013
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As well as having nine lives, Ramón has discovered how to change his hair colour. I am confused about his hair colour now, and apparantly Annie is also. She can't find him to shoot him.

Ramón tiene nueve vidas así como la abilidad por cambiar el color del pelo. Ahora estoy confundido sobre el color de su pelo, y aparentemente así es Annie. No puede ubicarle por dispararle. (help! grin)

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updated Jul 24, 2013
posted by 0095ca4c
Eeny, Meenie, Miney, Moe - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
He really is very clever. - annierats, Jul 23, 2013
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Aunque Ramón estaba tan desesperada que tiñó su pelo de jengibre y diguised sí mismo como un gatito, Annie todavía localicé con sus increíbles habilidades.

Although Ramón was so desparate that he dyed his hair ginger and diguised himself as a kitten, Annie still tracked him down with her amazing skills.

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updated Jul 23, 2013
posted by togtog
Uh oh! - pmikan-pam, Jul 23, 2013
These waitresses, they are used to finding the customers.. - annierats, Jul 23, 2013
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Felipe decided to ask for help from a fortune teller he had met in the market the day before.

Felipe decidió pedir ayuda de la adivina que conoció el día anterior en el mercado.

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updated Jul 21, 2013
edited by 0095ca4c
posted by 0095ca4c
Jaja, - pmikan-pam, Jul 19, 2013
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Felipe creía que puede ser un código secreto. Ramon, el gato, no dijo nada porque, aúnque podía hablar español, no podía cifrar .

Felipe thought it might be a secret code. Ramon, the cat, didn't say anything, because even though he could speak Spanish, he wasn't able to add up.

updated Jul 21, 2013
edited by annierats
posted by annierats