Let's write a story...

Question

So - here is a story for us. Each person can write a new section, until we have a whole story!

Érase una vez, había un joven muy pobre, cuyo mayor tesoro era un gato blanco hermoso, llamado Ramon.

Once upon a time, there was a very poor young man, whose greatest treasure was a beautiful white cat, called Ramon.

I have changed your category to, "Games." Do you have someone to correct? - rac1, Jul 17, 2013

This is a great idea! - Findy, Jul 17, 2013

Good idea togtog, let's have some fun! - annierats, Jul 18, 2013

Gekko had one going for months it was fabulous . - ray76, Jul 19, 2013

Dear rac - no, I don't have anyone to correct. Is there a way to get someone? - togtog, Jul 20, 2013

Answer 1

El hombre, cuyo nombre era Felipe, dio vuelta el mapa aquí y allá, pero no podría hacer ningún sentido en absoluto.

The man, whose name was Felipe, turned the map this way and that, but could not make any sense of it at all.

Answer 2

Si solo encuentro la tersura ,todos los galletas y pescado sera suyo.If only he could find the treasure all the cookies and fish would be his.

Mmm. Fish cookies. - heliotropeman, Jul 31, 2013

His very favorite, he has no will power - pmikan-pam, Aug 1, 2013

Answer 3

Ramon was tempted by cookies, fish and delicious appetizers, he went to the dark side of the force. Now that the force is behind him, it will be interesting to see the pursuit of power. Ramón fue tentado por las cookies, pescado y deliciosos aperitivos, fue al lado oscuro de la fuerza. Ahora que la fuerza está detrás de él, será interesante ver la búsqueda del poder.

Answer 4

Ramon had to take on a new identity. He was getting paranoid. His new name is Streak and Scat, but he had a hard time disguising his blue eyes. Ramón tuvo que asumir una nueva identidad. Se estaba poniendo paranoico. Su nuevo nombre es racha y Scat, pero tuvo un tiempo difícil disfrazar sus ojos azules.

I think we can make a song out of that "Streak and Scat" cat. - pmikan-pam, Jul 26, 2013

Answer 5

Así Annie es busca por Ramón, él no es fácil de encontrar ,

y él tiene con muchos amigos .

Le manda decir a todos,matar Annie y yo pagaré mucho dinero .

Ten cuidado Ramón ,El infierno no tiene furia como una mujer despreciada.

So Annie is looking for Ramon, he is not easy to find, and he has many friends.

He sends word to all, kill Annie and I pay a lot of money.

Careful Ramon, Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

He should have killed her when he had the chance - pmikan-pam, Jul 24, 2013

Answer 6

Pero después de todo esto, Ramón despertó en Barbados. Había dormido durante el viaje allí, y todo lo de "Annie" era sólo un sueño. Pero cuando vi el paisaje de Barbados, creía que aún estaba soñando, porque era muy hermoso.

But after all this, Ramon woke up in Barbados. He had slept during their trip there and all that about Annie was only part of his dream. But when he saw the landscape in Barbados, he thought he was still dreaming, because it was so beautiful.

Lovely isn't it? - pmikan-pam, Jul 24, 2013