I need someone to check my sentences please. Thanks a lot.
Causes: -I want to study French as a second language as a consequence of knowing that my best friend speaks French very well. -One consequence of studying at the last time is to get bad grades. -Yesterday, the volleyball game was postponed because of rain. -Due to the fact that I hadn’t money, I couldn’t buy my grandfather’s gift. -Many of the calls received by police come as a result of neighbor disputes.
Effects: -My friend and I were studying all night yesterday thereby getting good grades for the final exam. -I decided to travel to a foreign Country consequently, I have to break up with my boyfriend. -Getting bad grades is a cause of not paying attention in class. -My brother told my friend Ana something in Japanese hence the reaction of my friend. -He didn't work at all, and thus I was fired.
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Many of these are oddly worded so I will do my best.
Knowing that my best friend speaks French very well causes me to want to study French as a second language.
One consequence of studying at the last moment is that you might get bad grades.
Yesterday, the volleyball game was postponed because of rain. perfecto
Due to the fact that I hadn’t any money, I couldn’t buy my grandfather’s gift.
Many of the calls received by the police come as a result of disputes between (among) neighbors.
My friend and I studied all night yesterday thereby getting good grades on the final exam.
I have decided to travel to a foreign country, consequently, I will have to break up with my boyfriend.
Getting bad grades is one cause of not paying attention in class. Me parece un poco raro. Lo prefiero así Not paying attention in class can lead to bad grades. Not paying attention in class can be a major cause of bad grades.
My brother told my friend Ana something in Japanese hence the reaction of my friend. Un poco raro fuero de contexto pero esta oración sí funciona.
He didn't work at all, and thus I was fired. Lo mismo como lo de arriba. Un poco raro sin contexto. Quizas quieres decir que "and thus he was fired"
Hi Pamech, do not use text talk in the Spanish Dict Answers please. It confuses the people that are learning English here.
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