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yo soy de americano. a mi me gusta parcticar futbol y ver una pelicula. Tambein mi me gusta nadar. me mi no gusta tocar guaitry y canter. tambein me mi no gusta bailar. yo soy ojos avelleno, yo soy pelo castano y yo soy medanio. so soy aletico . y no soy artistica y yo no soy veijo. yo soy perezaosos a veces. me encanta el futbol

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updated Oct 19, 2010
posted by aybinder10

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yo soy de americano.

This says: I am from American. instead you need - Soy de los Estados Unidos

a mi me gusta

you can say this but if you like you can just shorten it to 'me gusta'

parcticar futbol y ver una pelicula.

check the word for practice here as you seem to have made a type, also fútbol has an accent. Did you really mean to say that you like to watch 'a' movie? Perhaps you want to change this to the plural form.

Tambein mi me gusta nadar.

También has an accent and once again you could just use 'me gusta' as you forgot the 'a' anyway.

me mi no gusta tocar guaitry y canter.

I don't like is 'no me gusta' and guitar and the verb to sing are both spelt incorrectly here.

tambein me mi no gusta bailar.

see the note above for 'I don't like'.

yo soy ojos avelleno, o soy pelo castano y yo soy medanio.

yo soy = I am and I'm sure you didn't want to say, 'I am' .. any kind of eyes or skin. Try looking up the verb 'to have' instead. Also medanio is misspelt.

soy aletico .

You are missing a letter for the spanish word for 'athletic' - you need to be careful with your typing otherwise your words will either be incorrect or they will not exist and will have no meaning - this goes for any language.

y no soy artistica y yo no soy veijo.

You have mixed up your masculine and feminine endings, atleticO, artisticA, viejO so you need to decided whether you need the masc or the feminine versions.

yo soy perezaosos a veces.

perezosa should not be plural

me encanta el futbol.

I hope that helps smile

updated Oct 19, 2010
posted by Kiwi-Girl
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Hola Aybinder10. Welcome to the forum. This needs some work. Try pasting it on to the translator bar and you will find the words that are spelled wrong. You will need to use the proper punctuation. Capitalize the first letter of each sentence.link text

updated Oct 19, 2010
posted by sanlee