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Could someone proofread these sentences and tell me if my Spanish is correct? Thank you so much for your help!

Yo estaba por tomar la leche pero me di cuenta que la estaba estropeado y la tiré en la basura.
(I was about to drink the milk but I realized that it was spoiled so I threw it out.)

Mi perro se tumba en su cama.
(My dog lies in his bed.)

Acabo de pensé en María. Me pregunto cómo esta ella.
(I just thought of Mary. I wonder how she is doing.)

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updated Jun 25, 2009
posted by --Mariana--

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Yo estaba por tomarme la leche pero me di cuenta que estaba cortada (dañada) y la tiré a la basura.
(I was about to drink the milk but I realized that it was spoiled so I threw it out.)
Mi perro se acuesta en su cama.
(My dog lies in his bed.)
Estaba pensando en María. Me gustaría saber cómo ella está.
(I just thought of Mary. I wonder how she is doing.) (I would like to know how she is doing)

updated Jun 25, 2009
posted by 00b83c38
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Thank you for helping me with this.

updated Jun 25, 2009
posted by --Mariana--
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Could someone proofread these sentences and tell me if my Spanish is correct? Thank you so much for your help!

Yo estaba por tomar la leche pero me di cuenta que la estaba estropeado y la tiré en la basura.

(I was about to drink the milk but I realized that it was spoiled so I threw it out.)

Mi perro se tumba en su cama.

(My dog lies in his bed.)

Acabo de pensé en María. Me pregunto cómo esta ella.

(I just thought of Mary. I wonder how she is doing.)

Yo diría: 'Iba a tomar leche pero me di cuenta que estaba mala/dañada..." y "Mi perro se echa en su cama".

updated Jun 25, 2009
posted by Pablo_
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Here's how I would say it.

Yo estaba por tomar la leche pero me di cuenta que [del]la[/del] estaba estropeada y la tiré en la basura.

(I was about to drink the milk but I realized that it was spoiled so I threw it out.)

Mi perro se acuesta en su cama.

(My dog lies in his bed.)

Acabo de pensar en María (or Pensé de Maria). Me pregunto cómo esta [del]ella[/del].

(I just thought of Mary. I wonder how she is doing.)

updated Jun 25, 2009
posted by Nathaniel