La llama que arde sin control / The flame that hastily burns?
A ver los poetas por aquí'escribí esta frase en Español y ahora quiero traducirla al Ingles pero no me pega nada del todo.
'La llama que arde sin control, pierde prontamente su esplendor.?
Hasta ahora en Ingles lo mejor que he sacado es:
'The flame that hastily burns, promptly loses its sparkle'.
"The flame that burns out of control, quickly loses its splendor." - would be a more literal interpretation.
But I'm not really totally happy with it. Let's see if somebody can help me come up with something better. Thanks.
1 Answer
The wild flame quickly dies.
The un- controllable flame quickly dies.
The wildly burning flame quickly dies.