Acercándose la noche, ambas están animadas;
Azucena scene 17 ''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Acercándose la noche, ambas están animadas;
mientras Magda habla y habla sobre su novio.
Walking into the evening they are animated;
Magda talks and talks about her boyfríend.
Esta es la primerita vez que Azucena ha 'salido';
su destino se empina y el mundo parecia apurarse.
It is the first time Azucena has ever 'gone out';
as her destiny rears, the world seems to hurry up.
Mientras las chicas caminan, pueden ver el estadio a distancia;
esta vista hace que el corazón de Azucena se acelere de repente.
As the girls walk, they can see the stadium from afar;
the sight caused Azucena's heart to accelerate suddenly.
Acercándose, oyen el sonido ruidoso de la banda del jaripeo;
un montón de gente está caminando en dirección a las gradas.
Nearing the arena, they hear brassy sounds of a rodeo band;
a flow of folks are heading in the direction of the stands.
Contra el firmamento oscureciente una enorme rueda de la fortuna está
detenida; las chicas mirando arriba mientras la rueda empieza a rodar.
Against the darkening sky is a giant ferris wheel that is
stopped; the girls look up as the wheel starts to revolve.
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NEW REVISION TO AZUCENA MASTER DOC
Azucena scene 17 '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Caminando en la noche, ambas están animadas,
Mientras Magda habla y habla sobre su novio.
Walking into the evening they are animated,
as Magda goes on and on about her boyfríend.
Esta es la primerita vez que Azucena ha 'salido';
su destino se empina y el mundo parecia apurarse.
This is young Azucena's first time 'going out';
as her destiny rears, the world seems to hurry.
Mientras las chicas caminan, pueden ver el estadio a distancia;
esta vista hace que el corazón de Azucena se acelere de repente.
As the girls walk, they can see the stadium from afar;
the sight caused Azucena's heart to accelerate suddenly.
Acercándose, oyen el sonido ruidoso de la banda del jaripeo;
un montón de gente está caminando en dirección a las gradas.
Nearing the arena, they hear brassy sounds of a rodeo band;
a crowd of folks are heading in the direction of the stands.
Contra el firmamento oscureciente una enorme rueda de la fortuna está
detenida; las chicas mirando arriba mientras la rueda empieza a rodar.
Against the darkening sky is a giant ferris wheel that is
stopped; the girls look up as the wheel starts to revolve.
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As evening approaches, they are both animated;
Magda goes on and on about her boyfríend.
This is Azucena's first time 'going out';
as her destiny rears, the world seems to speed up.
As the girls walk, they can see the stadium in the distance;
the sight made Azucena's heart suddenly race.
Approaching the arena, they hear the brassy sound of a rodeo band;
a crowd of people is heading toward the stands.
Against the darkening sky is a giant ferris wheel that is
stopped; the girls look up as the wheel starts to turn.
