slipping away
this is an important project, collaborating with a quality musical artist, translating original verses
from english language to spanish for the purpose of subtitles in music videos i am now producing.
i will be very genuinely grateful for help on this - for my life i cant think of how to say slipping away
(unless it were desvaneciendo, but that is disappearing, not quite the same....) do help please please
ANOTHER WORLD
Slipping into Another World
Slipping into the Heart I see inside of you
Slipping into Another World
Slipping into the Love I see surrounding you
Dont forget...I love you
The gentle whispered Grace in all we do
Dont forget...I love you
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
You're in us all!
Dont forget...I love you
the gentle whispered Grace in all we do
Dont forget...I love you
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
You're in us all...oh oh oh, oh oh..............
I promise to post the videos of these wonderful songs when they are eventually finished.
p.s. if anyone can tell me how to best translate "gentle whispered Grace" i will be very grateful
pps. "timelessness of HEART" has me stumped. Help!!!!!
6 Answers
Slipping Into Another World - original music
Taking on James Santiago's valuable suggestions:
ANOTHER WORLD
Slipping into Another World
Deslizandose al algun otro mundo
Slipping into the Heart I see inside of you
Deslizandose dentro del corazón que veo adentro de ti
Slipping into Another World
Deslizandose en algun otro mundo
Slipping into the Love I see surrounding you
Deslizandose al amor que veo rodeando a ti
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides.. te amo
The gentle whispered Grace in all we do
la gracia gentil susurrada en todo lo que hacemos
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides... te amo
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
La intemporalidad de corazón nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides.. te amo
The gentle whispered Grace in all we do
la suave y susurrada gracia en todo lo que hacemos
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides... te amo
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
La intemporalidad de corazón nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
You're in us all...oh oh oh, oh oh..............
the timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
La intemporalidad de corazón nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
The lyrics you gave do not contain the phrase "slipping away."
As for "slipping into," I see no reason not to maintain the feel of the original, and use deslizarse.
gentle whispered Grace: I don't know why grace is capitalized here, but "la suave y susurrada gracia" might work.
"La atemporalidad (or intemporalidad) de corazón" makes about as much sense to me as the original.
Natasha said:
Martin, post your attempt first please, and then others can make suggestions.
Translating poetry is not easy, especially if you are trying to translate out of your native language . . .
here goes - thanks!
ANOTHER WORLD
Slipping into Another World
Escabullendose al algun otro mundo
Slipping into the Heart I see inside of you
escabullendose dentro del corazón que veo adentro de ti
Slipping into Another World
escabullendose en algun otro mundo
Slipping into the Love I see surrounding you
escabullendose al amor que veo rodeando a ti
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides.. te amo
The gentle whispered Grace in all we do
la gracia gentil susurrada en todo lo que hacemos
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides... te amo
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
el corazon sin tiempo nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides.. te amo
The gentle whispered Grace in all we do
la gracia gentil susurrada en todo lo que hacemos
Dont forget...I love you
no te olvides... te amo
The timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
el corazon sin tiempo nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
You're in us all...oh oh oh, oh oh..............
the timelessness of HEART will see us thru...
el corazon sin tiempo nos va a hacer llegar
You're in us all!
Estas en todos nosotros!
Martin, post your attempt first please, and then others can make suggestions.
Translating poetry is not easy, especially if you are trying to translate out of your native language . . .
escabullirse
pronomial verb
1. to slip away (desaparecer)(de from)
How about: "se escabullendo" Just a guess. I looked this up of course.
