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Mi primer ensayo...

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This is the first essay that I have written for a college level Spanish course. The task seemed simple; write about your favorite movie, plus the usual requirements for an essay (intro, body, conclusion).The attached file is what I wrote. I handed it in today and will get it back on Thursday and I am SO NERVOUS!!! I wrote about the movie Pan's Labyrinth. If anyone is interested please look it over and tell me what you think.
Any major mistakes?
Overall things I need to work on?
Does it make ANY sense at all'

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updated FEB 11, 2009
posted by RaquelS

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ok tell me what do u think.....i think is much better...
saludos de chile

updated FEB 11, 2009
posted by Rodrigo
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I just corrected a few minor mistakes. It certainly makes sense to me.

updated FEB 10, 2009
posted by LadyDi
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