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a little help with a few phrases

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if someone could edit the following phrases (in context for a speaking activity on health), I would greatly appreciate it:

Well, remember, if you think that you have the flu or if your condition gets worse, talk to a doctor.

Bueno, recuerde, si crees que tener la gripe o si tu condición empeora, habla con un doctor.

Listen to me. For hiccups, take care of yourself in your house and follow my advice. I have given you the facts regarding your ailments and you will be able to take care of yourself with ease.

Escúchame. Para los hipos, cuídate en tu casa y sigue mi consejo. Yo he dicho los hechos con respecto a tu enfermedad y puedes cuidarte en tu casa con facilidad.

I hope this information helps you.

Espero que este informacion ayudate

...or, scare yourself. This will cure the physiological symptoms. (this is talking about hiccups)

...o, asústate. Este curará unas sintomas psicologicas.

i appreciate your help, if there is any way to make these phrases more advanced, I would live to hear any advice

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updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by Anand-M

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si crees que tienes la gripe

I think médico is the usual word for a medical doctor.

I think you could say: Te he informado de los hechos sobre tu enfermedad . . .

updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by Natasha
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esta información
oyeme
¿hechos o datos?
si crees que tienes la gripe
a ti mismo

updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by 0074b507
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How about: Te he dicho los hechos con respeto a tu enfermedad y puedes cuidarte en tu casa con facilidad. But everything is good and this may just be nitpicking a bit!! Eres un hablante advanzado!

updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by Daniel-Jones
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ayúdate (subjunctive needed')
información
síntomas
psicológicas (don't check the accent in our dictionary. They omitted it as you did. Check RAE.)
[url=http://buscon.rae.es/draeI/SrvltConsulta'TIPO_BUS=3&LEMA=psicologica]RAE[/url]
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ÿste (I like the accent, but they say it's not necessary)

updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by 0074b507
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I am not a fluent speaker, but it all looks good to me. I think you did a great job!

updated DIC 9, 2008
posted by Kelly
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