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Pienso que Annie te llamara ayer cuando estoy a la playa con Sophie(es una vida muy difícil es mio). Espero que tuviera un buen día,y que el señor Miguel te tratara como la reina quien eres.

Ithink annie called you yesterday while I was at the beach with Sophie(it's a difficult life, mine is). I hope you had a good day and that mister miguel treated you like the queen that you are.

as usual, just trying to find out how bad it is, Thanks

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updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by The-Steve

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You´re mixing tu and usted forms

oops, so I am. I was prepared for having chosen the wrong tense(i'm basically wading in the deep end) I didn't even notice I had used the wrong conjugation of the tense I had chosen though.
Thanks

Natasha said:

cuando estaba a la playa la mía es una vida muy difícil

You´re mixing tu and usted forms.

As per usual, wait for native speakers . . .

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updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by The-Steve
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Please change my may be to am.

updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by Eddy
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Creo que Annie te llamó ayer mientras yo estaba en la playa con sophie (La mía es una vida muy dificil).
Espero que hayas tenido un buen día y que el señor Miguel te trate como la reina que eres.

updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by Vernic
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Here are my few corrections
te llamaras - en lugar de te llamara
espero que tuvieras - en lugar de tuviera
te trataras - en lugar de te tratara
These are based on the fact that I think the personal or informal past subjunctive tense is required, however, I may be wrong.

updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by Eddy
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cuando estaba a la playa

la mía es una vida muy difícil

You´re mixing tu and usted forms.

As per usual, wait for native speakers . . .

updated NOV 11, 2008
posted by Natasha
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