website text without the domain names

Question

I can't have the domain names from my site here. So I'll try again. I know this is messed up, but I really need help with my translation. Here's the english:

Welcome to ___|\___|\___|\___|. Most of the apparel we carry is designed for and about fencing. But we also have mouse pads, prints and cards. And very recently, we developed an international line of fencing apparel. These have been designed in six languages and you'll find all these items at \___|\___|\___|\___|\___|_ . Just click the fencer button.

But don't forget about about our gothic apparel. These designs include images from some eighteenth century gravestones and have been edited for maximum detail. So take a look at 'the darkening'. The skull button will take you there.

This is a special design that we've created specifically in support of our troops in Iraq and Afghanistan. Wear this design proudly as your own expression of support. We all know someone who is risking their life abroad.

Here's the spanish:

Recepción al ___|\___|\___|\___|\__. La mayor parte de la ropa que llevamos se diseña para y sobre esgrima. Pero también tenemos cojines, impresiones y tarjetas de ratón. Y muy recientemente, desarrollamos una línea internacional de cercar la ropa. ÿstos se han diseñado en seis idiomas y usted encontrará todos estos artículos en \___|\___|\___|\___|\___|__. Apenas chascar el botón del cercador para 'esgrima y más'.

Pero no olvidar alrededor nuestra ropa gótica. Estos diseños incluyen imágenes de algunas lápidas mortuarias del siglo XVIII y se han corregido para el detalle máximo. Hechar una ojeada tan 'el oscurecimiento'. El botón del calavera cráneo le tomará allí.

ÿste es un diseño especial que hemos creado específicamente en apoyo de nuestras tropas en Iraq y Afganistán. Usar este diseño orgulloso como su propia muestra de apoyo. Todos sabemos a alguien que está arriesgando su vida al exterior.

I have some corrections that were suggested by others. But I wanted to start with a clean slate. Any ideas? I'm building a multi language website. Please help!!!!!!

Many Thanks

Answer 1

look, chow, this is what our translator came up with. Much better than your "attempt".

Pero no se olvide acerca de nuestro vestuario gótico. Estos diseños incluyen imágenes de algunas lápidas del siglo XVIII y han sido modificados para obtener el máximo detalle. Por lo tanto, échele un vistazo a la "oscurecimiento '. El cráneo botón te llevará allí.

So, there is now doubt, you need a translator, a pro. Until you provide a serious attempt, this thread is closed.

Answer 2

Quentin, you're surely right; you looked at it more carefully than I did. I was going from memory because the other thread was deleted.

In any case, this is a mess as posted, and it is still my opinion that he needs a professional translator.

Quentin said:

I disagree with you assessment. I was one of the responders to his original post. I don't see where he made any adjustments for the answers that he was provided. This is simply a repost of his original request minus the domain names. For instance that tarjetas (cojines) de ratón error was pointed out to him. I do see one minor adjustment, but even it was done incorrectly.

Natasha said:

chow5325, I´m going to give my opinion that you need to hire a professional translator. You´ve attempted to incorporate previously-made suggestions, but in the process you've almost made things worse. For example, you now have "tarjetas de ratón", or mouse cards, which doesn't make any sense. You just can't translate something like this word-for-word, or using a machine translator, and get comprehensible results.

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Answer 3

I disagree with you assessment. I was one of the responders to his original post. I don't see where he made any adjustments for the answers that he was provided. This is simply a repost of his original request minus the domain names. For instance that tarjetas (cojines) de ratón error was pointed out to him. I do see one minor adjustment, but even it was done incorrectly.

Natasha said:

chow5325, I´m going to give my opinion that you need to hire a professional translator. You´ve attempted to incorporate previously-made suggestions, but in the process you've almost made things worse. For example, you now have "tarjetas de ratón", or mouse cards, which doesn't make any sense. You just can't translate something like this word-for-word, or using a machine translator, and get comprehensible results.

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Answer 4

chow5325, I´m going to give my opinion that you need to hire a professional translator. You´ve attempted to incorporate previously-made suggestions, but in the process you've almost made things worse. For example, you now have "tarjetas de ratón", or mouse cards, which doesn't make any sense. You just can't translate something like this word-for-word, or using a machine translator, and get comprehensible results.