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Correction on a paragraph about my favorite place.

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Can someone please correct this paragraph for me. I wrote this same paragraph on the spanish practice group for Theme 5. It probably is understood when read but I would like to have grammar corrections. Please.

English:
I'm looking for a new favorite place and I believe that I've found it. I don't know how to describe it but it's small island of green grass, trees, benches and a water fountain. Its not a park, its in the middle of the block in a neighborhood near where I live. It looks so peaceful especially when the sun sets in the evening.

Spanish:
Estoy buscando por un nuevo lugar favorito y creo que lo he encontrado. No sé cómo describirlo pero es una isla pequeña de hierba verde, arboles, bancos y una fuente de agua. No es un parque, es en el medio de un barrio cerca a donde vivo. lo parece tan tranquilo especialmente cuando es puesta del sol por la noche. Thank you.

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updated JUL 27, 2008
posted by Cherub1

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Gracías.

updated JUL 27, 2008
posted by Cherub1
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Estoy buscando por un nuevo lugar favorito y creo que lo he encontrado. No sé cómo describirlo pero es una isla pequeña de hierba verde, árboles, bancos y una fuente de agua. No es un parque, está en el medio de un barrio cerca de donde vivo. lo parece tan tranquilo especialmente cuando se pone el sol por la noche. Thank you.

WELL DONE!

updated JUL 27, 2008
posted by 00494d19
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