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So I have to write 2 paragraphs about this thing and I'm not sure if my grammar is spot on so does any one mind proof reading my passage.

Spanish text: Después de leer la unidad, aprendí sobre la cultura de Latin America. Aprendí sobre la geografía, la fauna los jugetes y las celbraciones. Vivo en un desierto en Sureste de California, asi que ver el verdor de países tropicales como Costa Rica y Belize esta marviloso. Por menos que, la bulliciosa ciudades son como mi patria

Quiero ir Costa Rica porque a su diversa cultura. Quiero ir a los festivales coloridos. Quiero ver los efectos de las actividad volcánica. Yo también quiero ver la fauna y bellos paisajes de la naturaleza de Costa Rica. Quiero nadar en las soleadas playa y escalar altas montañas. Quiero ver a la bellexa de Costa Rica con mis ojos.

English text After reading this unit, I learnt a lot about the culture of Latin America, from the geography and wildlife to the toys and celebrations. I live in the middle of a desert in southern California, so seeing the rich greenery from the tropical countries like Costa Rica and Belize was really fascinating. However the bustling cities are much like my own

I would like to go to Costa Rica because of its diverse attractions. It holds several colorful festivals that i would love to take a part in. I want to see the effects of volcanic activity. I also want to see the wildlife and the beautiful nature landscapes of Costa Rica. I want to swim in the sunny beaches and climb the tallest mountains. I want to witness the beauty of Costa Rica with my own eyes.

PS. I wrote the english one first so the spanish translation kinda cuts out some of the stuff since i didn't know how to transalate it properly, so it won't be a word to word translation.

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updated Jul 15, 2017
edited by rac1
posted by insignia
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 After reading this unit, I learnt a lot about the culture of Latin America, from the geography and wildlife to the toys and celebrations. I live in the middle of a desert in southern California, so seeing the rich greenery from the tropical countries like Costa Rica and Belize was really fascinating. However the bustling cities are much like my own

I would like to go to Costa Rica because of its diverse attractions. It holds several colorful festivals that i would love to take a part in. I want to see the effects of volcanic activity. I also want to see the wildlife and the beautiful nature landscapes of Costa Rica. I want to swim in the sunny beaches and climb the tallest mountains. I want to witness the beauty of Costa Rica with my own eyes.

Después de haber leído ésta unidad (didáctica ). He aprendido mucho de la cultura de Latinoamérica, desde su geografía y vida salvaje hasta sus juegos y celebraciones. Vivo en medio de un desierto en el sur de California, así que ver el inmenso verdor de países tropicales como Costa Rica y Belize fu? realmente fascinante, aunque yo me sienta más identificad@ con la bulliciosa ciudad.

Me gustaría ir a Costa Rica por sus diversos atractivos .Mantiene muchos y coloridos festivales en los que me gustaría participar. Quiero ver los efectos de la actividad volcánica. También quiero ver la vida salvaje y los bonitos parajes naturales de Costa Rica. Quiero nadar en sus soleadas playas y escalar sus montañas más altas .Quiero ser testigo de la belleza de Costa Rica con mis propios ojos.

I have just translated your English text. I hope this helps

updated Jul 15, 2017
edited by 000a35ff
posted by 000a35ff
'translateD'. You can say I just translated ...if you want just with have to my ears (ie. Sounds better) I have just translated - Mardle, Jul 9, 2017
Thank you, Astotxua and Mardle. :):) - rac1, Jul 9, 2017
This user's profile must be British English because of the word "learnt". - NKM1974, Jul 9, 2017
But her essay/text refers to living in California - Mardle, Jul 9, 2017
Thanks girls - 000a35ff, Jul 9, 2017
de nada - Mardle, Jul 9, 2017