help check my night routine for errors!!!
Durante la semana, volver de la escuela y yo veo la television por dos horas. Yo hago mi tara, despues de esto yo se bana por mucho tiempo. Mi madre cocina la cena cada noche. Yo lavan los platos después de la cena. Yo voy a mi dormitorio. Cepillarse los dientes, cepillar mi pelo y despierto al sonar la alarma. Apaga mis luces y acostarse!
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Hello Dian,
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Please provide the English version so that we know for sure what you were attempting to say in Spanish!
Good attempt! There are few comments I can make in advance based on my initial observations:
1.You can lose the personal pronoun yo which you have used in various places throughout your text. Spanish natives rarely use these pronouns because the verb conjugations nearly always make it totally clear who is speaking!
For example, Veo la televisión can only mean I watch the television since veo is the 1st person singular conjugation, always referring to I, not any other person!
2.Verb conjugation: (yo) lavO los platos = I wash the dishes. (Ustedes/Ellos) LavAN = You (plural) or they wash the dishes.
3.tarEA Do you mean your homework? I think you do..which is tarEA not tara This might be a typo (typing error) Housework is translated as: las tareas de casa. Homework can also be: los deberes = homework (Spain)
4.The verb Cepillarse in your sentence: Cepillarse los dientes needs to be properly conjugated, not left as an infinitive verb. eg: Me cepillo los dientes etc...
Having looked again at this sentence, the order you have witten them in makes little sense because you would not brush your teeth and brush your hair before waking up to the sound of the alarm; unless you were doing these activities in your sleep! You need the correct verb to fall asleep which is dormirse. Me dormí = I fell asleep.
We look forward to offering you some more specific guidance tailored to your needs as soon as you post your English version / translation in your original post underneath the Spanish text
I hope this helps
Corrijan mi español si es necesario, por favor
Durante la semana, al volver de la escuela, veo la television dos horas. Hago mi tarea y luego me baño. Mi madre prepara la cena cada noche y yo lavo los platos después. Voy a mi dormitorio, me lavo la boca (1), me cepillo el pelo, apago las luces y me acuesto a dormir. En la mañana me despierto al sonar la alarma.
Note that
1) I used "me lavo la boca" in order to avoid repeating "cepillar" twice on the same line. It sounds awkward.
I hope this helps!
