Who can help me with my spanish homework?

Question

I was asked to write about myself in spanish. Can anyone tell me if they understand what i have written and tell me what gramatical mistakes i have made

Voy a hablar sobre mi. Tengo veiticinco, viviente con padres y hermana. Tener MSc en BIT de "Northumbria universidad" en 2006 ano, y desde pues minucioso por trabajo en IT. ! aun no suerte!

me gusta aprenda como tocar la guitarra, pero no intendo adonde encontrar de bueno profesor.

me gusta jugar el basketball, el tenis, pero todo me amigas son peresoso.

hay muy bonito cicin de persia, como: "khoresht fesenjoon, khoresht sabzy, chelo kabab barg y mas muchos. puedes intentar en "taste of persia" enfrente de "centre of life" junto a "central station".

Answer 1

Voy a hablar sobre mi. Tengo vienticinco, viviente(') con padres y hermana. Tener MSc en BIT de "Northumbria universidad" en 2006 ano, y desde pues minucioso por trabajo en IT! aun no suerte!

I go to speak above or over me. I have twentyfive, vivente(') with mis padres(you forgot the mis) and sister. To have MSc and BIT of Northumbra university in the year 2006 and since minute for work in IT even no luck.

me gusta aprenda como tocar la guitarra, pero no intendo adone encontrar de bueno profesor-
I like to learn how to play guitar, but no intend adone(') to find good professor.

Me gusta jugar el basketball, el tenis, pero todo me amigas son peresoso.

I like to play basketball, tennis, but all my friends are lazy which peresoso is I think you meant perezoso.

hay muy bonito cicin de persia, como: "khoresht fesenjoon, khoresht sabzy, chelo kabab barg y mas muchos. puedes intentar en "taste of persia" enfrente de "centre of life "junto a "central station."

There very pretty cicin(') of persia, how "khoresht fesenjoon, khoresht sabzy, chelo kabab barg and more much. You can to intern in "taste of persia" opposite of life center joined at "central station."

I have no idea what you were saying on the last sentence.

Answer 2

Thanks for your help. I guess there are many ways that are correct. My spanish lesson was teaching the Yo bailo phrase, so I should have said that it needs to start with that.

Thanks again - that was a fast reply!

Answer 3

I think I would say it

Cuando estoy feliz me gusta bailar

which is "when i'm happy i like to dance." But i'd be open to other ways to say it.

welcome to the forum

Answer 4

Can someone help me with a phrase?

I dance when I'm happy

is it ---|>Yo bailo cuando tengo feliz?

hope that is not too far off!

Answer 5

In this case you may use -Hay muy buenos....,instead bonito.
Good lock!

Answer 6

Thanks for your help, i dont know what cicin means here as well, i think is typing error and i cant remember the word i wanted to use. lol
but i know its not cine, cze cine means cinema and i am talking about the delicious food in a persian resturant!

Thanks again for your help.

Answer 7

Hi, thank you for your help. The first part that you didnt understand, i was talking about finding a job in Information Technology and for the last part i was talking about a persian resturant which sell very delicious foods and its location!

Thanks for your help again

Answer 8

Hola Azadeh, ésta es mi aportación:
Voy a hablar sobre mí, mi nombre es ......., tengo 25 años, vivo con mis padres y hermana, obtuve una maestría (especialidad) en BIT de la Universidad de Northumbria en 2006 y desde entonces he buscado minuciosamente un trabajo en IT (he esperado pacientemente un trabajo en IT) ¡pero no he tenido suerte!.
Me guastaría aprender a tocar la guitarra pero no sé donde encontrar un buen profesor, también me gusta jugar basketball y tennis pero todas mis amigas son perezosas.

' The next is just a gess:
Hay muy bonito cicin (¿cine') de persia, como "khoresht fesenjoon, khoresht sabzy, chelo kabab barg", puedes buscar (probar) en "taste of persia" enfrente de "centre of life" junto a "central station". ( Sorry I'm not sure what are you talking about in this part).