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Spanish toy project edit

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I have a project on my favorite toy and I was worndering of someone could look through and edit it for me to see if I did it right it is in the imperfect tense

Mi juguete favorito era mi oso de peluche. Yo Recibía mi oso de peluche cuando yo tenía tres años. Mis padres me dio mi oso de peluche como un regalo. Yo llamaba mi oso de peluche emma. Era rosado y morado. La llevaba en todos lados que iba. Mi hermana y yo le jugábamos con ella todos los días.

It should say my favorite toy is my teddy bear. I got my teddy bear when I was three. My parents gave me my teddy bear as a present. I named my teddy bear emma. My teddy bear is pink and purple. I brought my teddy bear everywhere with me. My sister and I played with my teddy bear everyday.

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updated Mar 29, 2017
posted by hayley223
Welcome to SpanishDict. - rac1, Mar 28, 2017

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Quick read, I think you got almost all of them right.

No capital R on Recibía and it should be recibió (preterite) because this was a one time event.

You have a mistake with "en todos lados" Look up "everywhere" in the SD dictionary and I think you will figure out which one to use. One more hint...you use one form if you say "They WERE everywhere" vs. if you say "I brought them everywhere." Think of the second form as I brought them TO everywhere, which you wouldn't actually say in English, but this is how Spanish works sometimes. smile

You don't want the le before jugábamos.

Nice job!

updated Mar 29, 2017
edited by DilKen
posted by DilKen
Ok thank you - hayley223, Mar 28, 2017