El Fin De Semana Assignment

Question

Hola, mi llamo ….... La semana pasada yo visito Madrid. Hice muchas cosas divertido. Mi primer dia hice muchas cosas. Voy de compras a Centro Comercial Príncipe Pío. Después de esto yo voy al teatro a Madrid Theatre. Después cual Me parar con una familia. El segundo día va a ver un partido de fútbol Real Madrid jugar Barcelona. El juego era bueno. Fui a comer a La Tragantúa Restaurante. Después cual Me parar con una familia. Vemos una película cuando esté en casa. Vemos la película “UP”. El día siguiente, fuimos al festival de San Isidro el 15 de mayo. Cuando yo era allí, tengo que ver la pelea de toro. Comimos muchos churros. Después de la fiesta, fuimos a Alberche playa. En la playa, había cangrejos, peces y tiburones . Nosotros el esquí acuático. Necesitamos mucho la loción bronceadora. Había mucho sol. Después hicimos castillo de arena. Mi ultimo dia vemos una exhibición en el museo. Vemos muchas cosas interesante. Todo es divertido vas visitar pronto.

Answer 1

Toó many mistakes. It seems you used a computer translator.

Isn't that a shame , I believe that doing that inhibits ones learning process, thanks mate. - ray76, Mar 3, 2017

I would agree with you, Polenta Nothing gained by doing that. A good teacher would see right through that ruse (trick) - FELIZ77, Mar 3, 2017

Answer 2

Welcome to the forum. Are you learning Spanish in the UK? What tenses have you studied? The present perfect [hablar + pp] is used a lot in Spain. You have used the imperfect in your essay and the preterite [though make sure you remember accents on first and third person] You have used the present tense where you need a past tense or infinitive.

Try the dictionary here or word reference. For example the famous 'art' of bullfighting is known as 'la corrida' pelea is a fight in the street. For a change of vocabulary you could use the verb construir [build] instead of hacer [make] in relation to the sand castles.

Are you saying you stayed with a Spanish family or with relatives? Remember adjectives agree with nouns as to gender and plural or singular.

Read through, edit your post to correct errors you can now see then so we know what you want to say add an English version.

By the way, you want to learn and show your teacher you have been paying attention, but if your piece is perfect they will either think you 'cheated' or think you understand everything.

Buena suerte

Answer 3

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