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¿Quien esta haciendo qual?

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Hola. Here is a sentence from my reading in which I cannot figure out which person is doing the action. I know what I think is happening, but I don't see how the sentence says that. The narrator is a private detective. He is talking with Mariano del Moral, who wants to hire the detective. They are discussing the price. From the book: "Por eso, cuando Mariano del Moral me dijo le daré cinco mil pesos por sus servicios, estuve a punto de conectarle un golpe en su mandibula". I suppose it should say, "...me dijo (que) me dará cinco mil pesos por mi servicios". ¿Estoy equivocado? ¿Esta el libro equivocado? Grácias, Steve

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updated Mar 1, 2017
posted by AndaBien

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To me this reads like humour:

That's why, when Mariano del Moral said to me that I will give him five thousand pesos for his services, I was about to punch him in the jaw.

As if Mariano thinks he is doing me a favour letting me work for him perhaps? Like saying "You're lucky I'm letting you work for me - or - you should be paying me." I'm just a learner though so native input may say otherwise ... and it does smile

updated Mar 1, 2017
edited by jellonz
posted by jellonz
Quizás. Tal vez ha atinadolo. Es sarcasmo. - AndaBien, Feb 26, 2017
Hola Anda. Thanks for the best answer vote, but after reading Julian's I think you should change it to his :) - jellonz, Mar 1, 2017
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"Por eso, cuando Mariano del Moral me dijo le daré cinco mil pesos por sus servicios, estuve a punto de conectarle un golpe en su mandibula.

The writer / printer simply forgot to put into quotation "le daré cinco mil pesos por sus servicios" (direct reported speech).

To put this phrase into indirect reported speech: "Por eso, cuando Mariano del Moral me dijo que me diera cinco mil pesos por mis servicios, estuve a punto de conectarle un golpe en su mandibula".

In both cases the detective talks about wanting to hit Mariano due to his, Mariano´s, offer of 5K pesos.

updated Feb 27, 2017
edited by 005faa61
posted by 005faa61
Ah. That makes more sense :) In my version would a "que" be necessary Julian? "... me dijo *que* le daré..." - jellonz, Feb 27, 2017
Jellonz, I need the complete sentence to be able to comment - 005faa61, Feb 27, 2017
"Por eso, cuando Mariano del Moral me dijo *que* le daré cinco mil pesos por sus servicios, estuve a punto de conectarle un golpe en su mandibula". - jellonz, Feb 27, 2017
That's why, when Mariano del Moral said to me *that* I will give him five thousand pesos for his services, I was about to punch him in the jaw. - jellonz, Feb 27, 2017