writing a letter- please proofread!

Question

The amount owed to the Clerk of the Court is $______. The amount owed is due on [ date ]. You do not need to attend traffic school. Thank you for allowing me to assist you in this matter.

El monto adeudado por oficial de la corte es $______. El monto adeudado es debido en [ date ]. No necesitas asistir a la escuela de trafico. Gracias por pemitirme asistir en esta materia.

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Answer 1

"El monto adeudado por oficial de la corte es $______. El monto adeudado es debido en [ date ]. No necesitas asistir a la escuela de trafico. Gracias por pemitirme asistir en esta materia."

La cantidad adeudada al oficial de la corte es $______. La cantidad adeudada le es debida el [ date example format 8 de diciembre 2016 ]. No necesita asistir a la escuela de tráfico. Gracias por permitirme ayudarle con este asunto.

Changes:

-La cantidad adeudada al = This means "the amount owed to the...". The gender has to match the noun.
-le = this just means that it is owed to him.
-debida = has to match the gender of cantidad
-necesita = formality in this letter (as expressed in my last post) is important
-tráfico = needs to have the accent
-ayudarle con este asunto. = I've never used asistir to mean "to help" or "to assist"; ayudar sounds better to me. I would use materia to talk about material. I would rather use "asunto".