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Un Cuento De La Infancia

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Are there any errors or grammar mistakes in my writing? Thanks smile

Era un dia frio y hacia nevando. Tenia diez anos y mi cumpleanos estaba llegando. Mis padres dejaron todo el dia. Me preguntaba que regalo mis padres me daban. Yo queria un perro para dos anos, pero mis padres no me lo daron. Ellos me dijeron, “Es mucha trabaja para mantener un perro.” Cuando era el tiempo para celebrar, mis padres entraron con una caja grande. Despues, todo la mi familia estaba cantando “Feliz Cumpleanos.” Pero cuando mi familia estaba cantando yo vi que la caja estaba moviendo y yo tenia la sospecha. Yo abri la caja y yo vi dentro. Yo estaba muy soprendido, porque finalmente yo recibi un perro.

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updated Nov 18, 2016
posted by FluffyRabbit
I love your name and avatar! I have a bear named fluffy (fluff for short). I hope you get help on your writing. :) - Sassette, Nov 18, 2016
Welcome to SpanishDict. - rac1, Nov 18, 2016

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There are many errors. You used no accent marks, the tildes ~ where needed are missing. There also some vocabulary and grammar errors. In a few places the errors are such that I'm not sure of what you are trying to say. If you will supply an English version, we will be able to check it, but it will require a lot of work because of the accent marks. Maybe you could revise that part of it yourself. The accent marks are at the bottom of both the question box and the answer box. They ARE important and considered part of the spelling.

updated Nov 18, 2016
edited by Daniela2041
posted by Daniela2041
:) - ian-hill, Nov 18, 2016
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updated Nov 19, 2016
edited by Sassette
posted by Sassette