Anybody can help me correcting this text

Question

Very often we spend a lot of time waiting for the right moment to be happy whether a better job, holidays or better time. Sometimes time doesn’t change, people don’t change, things don´t change. We have to recognize that we are responsible for our life and we are only person who can make a right moment for happiness for us . It time to begin being happy now not tomorrow or next year

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Answer 1

Would you please fill out your profile? You are learning English, right? What is your native language? It helps to know these things when one tries to answer a question.

I was a bit confused by the phrase "we are only person who can make a right moment for happiness for us", so I paraphrased it a bit differently.

Very often we spend a lot of time waiting for the right moment to be happy, whether it's because of a better job, the holidays or a better time. Sometimes time doesn’t change, people don’t change, things don´t change. We have to recognize that we are responsible for our own life and we are the only person who can make a moment the right moment to be happy . It's time to begin being happy now, not tomorrow or next year.

Thank you Jack for reply! im learning English and my mothers lenguage is Spanish - Kat1992, Nov 6, 2016