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You will get a much better response if you break it into paragraphs. - rac1, Sep 24, 2016

I agree. It's really uncomfortable to read long pieces of texts when they aren't broken into paragraphs. - Oshnaj, Sep 24, 2016

What is your Spanish level , we need that to determine your proficiency in this work. - ray76, Sep 25, 2016

I'm not too sure but I'm in year 11 so I think I would either be intermediate or advanced. - 00592761, Sep 25, 2016

So you have a year to your GCSE. Intermediate is more appropriate. Just add it to your profile. Do you know any subjunctive? - Mardle, Sep 25, 2016

Your double post has been deleted . Please do not double post . - ray76, Sep 25, 2016

ray I had tried to reply to the post but lost my connection. The first half was a repeat but the second part was new - Mardle, Sep 25, 2016

@mardle, don't worry she has been getting help since February she will post it again. - ray76, Sep 25, 2016

Zara I suggest you remove the paragraphs about Wales because Luis a very helpful Mexican has corrected that part - Mardle, Sep 25, 2016

I've added new things to the Wales parts so they aren't exactly duplicates - 00592761, Sep 26, 2016

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Zara I started replying to your later post, but my internet went down and I lost the post.

I see it has now been deleted.

People here, love learning and want to help. However, in your enthusiasm your pieces are so long that they take a lot of time to correct.

I suggest you edit this piece to deal with your holiday in Wales and amend your title to Spanish writing - trip to Wales.

Is this course work or your effort to improve your Spanish for a test?

if you started learning Spanish in senior school rather than primary school and are due to take GCSE in June, intermediate is a fair reflection. It covers most people on the forum, many of whom are very knowledgeable.

When I took my GCSE the syllabus did not cover the subjunctive.

so far as your lengthy 3rd post the moderators thought it was a duplicate. I realised the second half was new. If you want to post more give each piece a new title

My internet is so slow I will stop now.

The first part of this was posted two days ago and answered , the Welsh part has now been repeated 3 times . - ray76, Sep 25, 2016

OK I didnt check her earlier answer. I cannot see anyone having the time to go through the whole of this. - Mardle, Sep 25, 2016

she needs to edit to my trip to Canada - Mardle, Sep 25, 2016

Honestly guys I'm so sorry for the confusion. I posted the whole piece on the weekend but I think it has been deleted. I'm a little confused on what you guys want me to do now. And also, I added to the Wales part so it wasn't exactly a repeat. - 00592761, Sep 26, 2016