Spanish paragraph on shopping please proofread Asap!!!!!

Question

Can you please look over this paragraph to see if it's correct??

Me flipa it de compras normalmente Es muy emociante quando comprar barata la ropa me encantar. Pero de vez en cuando ir de compras Es abburido porque tengo no el dinero gastar y no puedo comprar Nuevo la ropa. Mi favorito la ropa tienda Es H&M porque no tengo que viajar largo y me encantar la ropa Ellos vender. Mi prefiero comprar por internet porque Es facil y mas variedad. Mi favorito tienda en linea es pretty little thing porque Es barata y util. Si tuvieria mas dinero yo compraria muchas ropa y zapatos.

Rough English: I love shopping usualy it's very exciting when I buy cheap clothes I love. But from time to time shopping Es boring because I have no money y I can't buy new clothes. My favourite clothes shop is h&m because I don't have to travel far and I love the clothes they sell. I prefer to shop online because it's easy y more selection. My favourite online shop is pretty little thing because it's cheap and uselful. If I had more money I would buy more clothes and shoes.

If you are taking a class, it would do you well to receive corrections from your teacher. You can learn from mistakes in class if they are discussed. Having people just correct your Spanish does not really teach you much. - Jubilado, Jun 27, 2016

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Answer 1

I see some problems with both the English and Spanish paragraphs. Which one do you want proofread?

The Spanish I wrote the English in a rush - Emmajade2001, Jun 27, 2016

I proofread it in a rush. Sorry, no time to post my corrections here. - jtaniel, Jun 28, 2016

Answer 2

It would be better for you if Julian is willing to proof read your text. I am not sure what you want to say and some of this is because I do not know where your sentences finish. It is very repetitious - what subject do you need to talk about? Is it for an external exam - although I have a young relative who has just finished her GCSEs [including Spanish] and clearly you are not taking A level.

Blockquote Me flipa it de compras normalmente Es muy emociante quando comprar barata la ropa me encantar.

What do you mean at the start? I understand ' Me flipa ir de compras' However, are you saying 'usually I love shopping '?

When you say cheap clothes [ropa barato] do you mean gangas /bargains or rebajas /sale items? Are you saying you enjoy looking for bargains or just if you find clothes you like which are inexpensive it is exciting? You then seem to say however, sin embargo, when I have no money to spend on buying new clothes shopping bores me [or I have no interest going shopping] From that I assume you are not a window shopper.

A clothes shop is tienda de ropa. H & M is a clothes shop. You want to say Mi tienda de ropa favorita es .. Nueva can go before or after the noun here I think you want to use it after the noun.

look at position of adjectives and agreement of nouns. In one place I would use the construction la or lo que es but is it a phrase you know? Have you been taught the subjunctive?

Look at your Spanish and English again and edit it. You have missed accents but if it is only for you to read/learn it doesn't matter but it is important you stress correctly and you use the accents in written work