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What do you normally do on holiday?
Normalmente, voy a visito un lugar intersante- por ejemplo el año pasado visite Japan y este año visitaré Peru con mi familia. Cuando me voy vacaciones, me gusta para mirar los monumentos y experimentar cosas nuevas. Pienso que pasar horas tomando el sol tanto como tumbado en la piscina es inútil debido al hencho que puede hacer un calquier lugar. Por la tanto suelo aprender sobre la cultura antes de viajar y comiendo alimentos nuevos durante mi visita.
Normally, I visit interesting countries- for example last year I went to Japan and this year I will visit Peru with my family. When I go on holiday, I like to look at monuments and experience new things. In my opinion spending hours sunbathing as well as lying by the pool is useless due to the fact you can do it anywhere. Therefore I tend to learn about the culture before travelling and eat new foods during my visit.
Where did you go on holiday last year, what activities u did and where u stayed?
Como se dijo, el año pasado visite Japan con mi padre, mi hermano, mi abulo y mi primo. El primer día en Tokyo comimos sushi, cual es mas delicoso que en sushi en inglaterra. Quedamos en Toko para dos noches antes de mover a Nagoya, donde vimos una lucha de sumo. Despues de ver una lucha viajamos el tren de bala a Hiroshima. Me fascina en historia de la Guerra asi que me gustó todos los museos. Pasamos unos pocos minutos en silencio y pensamos acerca del public el que murió. En los úlitmo día fuimos una excuesión en barco a Isla de Miyajima mientras que hay visitamos un santuario y bebimos saké. Que era la major experiancia de mi vida.
Like I said, last year I visited Japan with my dad, my brother, my granddad and my cousin. On the first say we ate sushi, which is more delicious than the sushi in England. We stayed in Tokyo for two nights before moving to Nagoya, where we watched a sumo match. After we watched the match we travelled by bullet train to Hiroshima. I am fascinated in war history so I liked all the museums. We spent a few minutes in silence and thought if all the people that died. On the last day we went on a boat trip to Miyajima Island, whilst there we visited sanctuaries and drank saké. It was the best experience of my life.
Describe something that happened that you really liked or disliked
Opino que el alojamiento en Hiroshima era realmente decepcionante. Según el sitio web, las habitaciones están limpias y los empleados son amables, sin embargo este no era el caso, la habitación parecía que habían limpiado por semanas y los empleados son bastante rudo y no es útil. Lo bueno del alojamiento era que tenía una bonita ver. Ademas odio el viaje a Japan ya que es diecisiete houras, por la tano era muy aburrido- dormí durante todo es.
I am of the opinion that the accommodation in Hiroshima was really disappointing. According to the website, the rooms are clean and the employs are friendly, however this was not the case, the room looked like it hasn’t been cleans for weeks and the employs were quite rude and not helpful. The good thing was the room has a nice view. In addition I hates the journey to japan because it was 17 hours, therefore I was very bored- I slept during most of it.
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Welcome to the forum. Can you add your level of English and Spanish to your profile? For example you compare sushi in Japan to sushi in England. Does that mean you live in the UK? If you live in the UK you should be fluent or advanced in English, but there are lots of mistakes in your last paragraph - is that carelessness, predictive text or because English isn't your first language?
I can see errors in your Spanish but am about to go out. Things like it is ir a and gusta is followed by a singular noun or the I infinitive.
I will try and have a look when I get back.
I would love to go back to
Peru it is so interesting and beautiful. I am sure you will go to Machu Picchu try not to miss
The small towns nearby and I also loved Arequipa.
