Spanish Paragraph help

Question

I have to write a paragraph in which I:

1. Introduce myself.
2. Describe your expectations for a class when you started and what you think now.
3. Plans for summer.
4. Finalize with a goodbye.

This is what I have written and I was wondering if you could proofread it and tell me if it makes sense! Thanks!!!!

Hola, me llamo Camille. Nací en Dallas el tres de Octubre. A principios del año, la geografía era muy fácil. Tuve un 95. Ahora yo soy no tan buena porque tenemos un nuevo profesor. Los pruebas son difíciles de. Ahora tengo un 89. Tengo que trabajar más difícil. Tengo que estudiar este verano. Adiós mi amigo! Gracias por enseñarme Español.

We like for new members here to introduce themselves in their profiles with their gender, and levels of proficiency in English and Spanish. Do that and get my vote and maybe an answer. Also the English of your essay would help. - Jubilado, May 26, 2016

Welcome to SpanishDict. Yes, you need to add the English. - rac1, May 26, 2016

I can do this. Is it mandatory to have the English before I can make corrections? How about the profile? - Daniela2041, May 26, 2016

Welcome to the forum. Julian is a fluent Spanish speaker so you are lucky he has helped. The reason we ask you to add language level is it helps when giving an answer - some have neither language as their native tongue and if you decide to answer someone - Mardle, May 26, 2016

Learning English will be so pleased if they get an answer from a fluent speaker. Gender is just because in Spanish adjectives agree with subject so if you are female adjectives will be different to male friend. If a correction makes you think ask another - Mardle, May 26, 2016

For example sacar notas may be a new phrase to you - it will be a useful phrase! - Mardle, May 26, 2016

Answer 1

Your paragraph tells me your name and gender, but you should still do as Jubilado suggests and fill out your profile page.

The changes I would make:

Hola, me llamo Camille. Nací en Dallas el tres de Octubre. A principios del año, la clase de geografía era muy fácil. Saqué una nota de 95. Ahora no soy tan buena para la clase porque tenemos a un nuevo profesor. Las pruebas son tan difíciles que ahora tengo una nota de 89. Tengo que trabajar más duro. Tengo que estudiar este verano. ¡Adiós mi amigo! Gracias por enseñarme Español.