practicing for exam - take 3, proof reading

Question

I know, perfect tense, future (voy a...), present (estoy hablando) and reflexive also i do have a limited vocabulary.

Hola mis amigos, esta vez voy a hablar sobre el viaje a Bangladesh como una letra.

¡Hola mi amigo! El viaje ha ido bien pero hemos estado en el aeropuerto un poco tiempo. Hemos llevado cuatros semanas en Bangladesh y todo el tiempo ha hecho frío, pero no tengo problema con el tiempo allí pero mi familia pueden que mucho más frío que mí pero en la mañana ha estado un tiempo un poco comfortable. Durante del día hemos jugado fútbol y badminton, hay muchos niños querer jugar con mí, quizás vosotros quieran jugar con un chico de suecia quizás un poco diferente. Este ha estado mi vacaciones y mi verano ¿como has estado tu vacaciones y verano?

íBienvenidos!

Hello friends, this time i'm going to write about the trip to Bangladesh in a letter.

Hello friend! The trip went well but we stayed at the airport a while. We where in Bangladesh four weeks and the whole time it was cold but it was no problem with the weather there but my family thought it was more cold than i thought but on the morning it was a comfortable weather. During the day we played soccer and badminton, there where a lot of kids that wanted to play with me, maybe they wanted to play with a Swedish kid maybe it is a bit different. This was my vacation and summer. How was your vacation and summer.

Goodbye!

Como means like. Use "en" - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Letra is like abc's. Carta= letter as in mail - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Cuatro semanas. No s after cuatro - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Tenses are kind of mixed up. Do a little more research on perfect tense. It means have or has. - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

I don't know if I would say "que mi". I would say que yo - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Mí* - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Thought= pensar (to think)= pensó (past/preterite tense) - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Conjugate querer after niños - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Mis and tus vaccaciones - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

Vacaciones* - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

None of your tenses were really past tense to be honest. Everytime you used perfect tense, it translates to have/has. - Ramonaspiker, May 22, 2016

oh yea we haven't really learned preterite although i do kind of know it but i don't want do use it on the exam, because we haven't fully gone through it - HaCurry, May 22, 2016

All in all this text may be better - HaCurry, May 22, 2016

Oh and i wanted to say como like a letter - HaCurry, May 22, 2016

Answer 1

Just a quick look at the letter in spanish and i noticed the following. You used hemos/he/ha instead of habíamos/había. You can look up the difference in meaning here on spanishdict!

Im not sure that he has studied the imperfect or preterite yet and the present perfect is used a lot in Spain - Mardle, May 21, 2016

Yea we i haven't learned imperfect or preterite although i have kind of learned preterite on my own but i don't want to use it on the exam because i don't think i fully understand it. - HaCurry, May 21, 2016