practicing for exam, proof reading
I know only kind of know the basics, perfect tense, future (voy a...) and present tense (estoy hablando).
¡Hola! Me llamo Iram, soy suecia ciudad estocolmo en un región se llama Hägersten. estamos viviendo en una montaña con mi madre, mi padre, mi tio, igual que mi padre esta viajando en Bangladesh que está muy lejos de aquí. Estoy estudiando en un escuela muy cerca de mi casa, el colegio se llama aspudden y tambien este está en una montaña pocito, casi todo el país suecia hay montañas es un ambiente un poco dificil, pero me gusta, por eso yo he llevado diez y seis años. Este un poco sobre de mi ¿Puedes explicar un poco de tu país?
¡Hasta luego!
Hello, my name is Iram, i'm from Stockholm which is in Sweden, from a region called Hägersten. I'm living on a mountain with my mom, dad and my uncle but my dad is travelling in Bangladesh which is very far from here. I'm studying in school very close to my home, the school's name Aspudden and it's also on a small mountain, nearly the whole Swedish country there is mountains, it is a environment a bit difficult, but i like it because i've been living here 16 (i wanted to say i've been living here my whole life). This is a bit about me. Can you explain (i wanted to say "tell") a bit about your country?
Til later!
2 Answers
Bienvenido al foro.Välkommen !
We cannot do home+work for you, I' m afraid but I'll make some suggestions.
Soy Sueco. Vivo en Hägersten, en las fueras de Estocolmo. ) This is a suburb of Stochjolm, not a mountain, there are no mountains near Stockholm, maybe you mean a forest? ) Put capital letters on all names, it is correct ina all languages. Aspudden. A small mountain is more likely a hill, un cerro. Do you mean you are 16 and have always lived in Sweden ( tengo 16 años y siempre he vivido en Suecia// vivo en Suecia), or that you have lived in Sweden for 16 year( llevo 16 años viviendo en Suecia)? Anyway, well tried!
Welcome to the forum. Can you add your language level in English and Spanish to your profile. The English in both your written pieces have mistakes but you obviously are more advanced with English. I assume you are fluent in Swedish as are a number of members, but not me!
Do you want your English corrected too?
Julian corrected your last piece and included the subjunctive. I managed to pass my first formal Spanish exam without knowing the subjunctive, so it may be you do not yet know the subjunctive. It is usually the last tense [mood] to be taught. The first introduction is usually imperatives some of which are the same as the subjunctive tense.
