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proofread please i need it

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please proofread I really need it, thank you

Fui a celebracione la semana pasada. Fui a una fiesta de cumpleaos. Mi primo quien convertido mi tres celebra un cumpleaos. La fiesta de cumpleaos tuvo poco invitados. En el la fiesta de cumpleaos, hubo pocos regalos. Hubo tanta bailando en la fiesta. La fiesta tena muchas comidas. Hubo galletas, postres, dulces, y un pastel. me gusta la fiesta de cumpleaos porque fue pequeño y divertido

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updated Apr 13, 2016
posted by musicman321
Welcome to SpanishDict. Please add your language proficiency to your profile. Add the English, please. - rac1, Apr 13, 2016
I would really need to see the English to this as the Spanish is so full of errors it is difficult to ascertain the writer's meaning. - Daniela2041, Apr 13, 2016

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Welcome to the forum

Can you add your level of Spanish and English to your profile? It helps when answering your questions and assessing any answers

There are some spelling errors but I don't know if it is predictive text. Eg cumpleaños. Can you add the English version? I am not sure what you want to say in the sentence starting ' mi primo'

If you add on your profile whether you are male or female it will be clear if your adjectives are correct.

Buena suerte

updated Apr 14, 2016
posted by Mardle