Please Proofread- 2 short sentences

Question

Could you please point out any mistakes (spelling, grammar, agreements, tenses, etc.) with these sentences:

Ademas, en el futuro, voy a ser mas dependiente en la tecnología ya que siempre ha sido practicó. Me gustaría vivir en un mundo mas digital.

Intended text: I think that technology is very important for me. In addition, in the future, I am going to be more dependent on technology because it has always been practical. I would love to live in a more 'digital' world.

Could you please provide the English version of what you are expressing? There are some errors, but we would like to know for sure what you are saying. Thanks very much. Just click on "edit" under your post. - Jubilado, Feb 20, 2016

Agreed, some errors are easy to fix, but others impossible without knowing exactly what you want to say. :) - bosquederoble, Feb 20, 2016

Done my intended purpose - spanishrookie123, Feb 20, 2016

Answer 1

La tecnología es muy importante para mi. Además, en el futuro voy a depender más de ella porque siempre ha sido muy práctica. Me gustaría vivir en un mundo más digital.

Jubilado has made a good attempt! I like his use of the word funcional, so you may want to use that word. My only correction to his attempt is this one: en el futuro (...) porque siempre ha sido funcional (...)

Well done!

Thank you fooining in. Gracias - Mardle, Feb 20, 2016

Marifer: spanishrookie123 también ha puesta algo muy largo: "Checking interview- Urgent help required". Necesita la ayuda de un / una hablante nativo(a) como ti. Gracias de mi parte para tu aprobación de mi respuesta. - Jubilado, Feb 20, 2016

Answer 2

Ademas, en el futuro, voy a ser mas dependiente en la tecnología ya que siempre ha sido practicó. Me gustaría vivir en un mundo mas digital.

Intended text: I think that technology is very important for me. In addition, in the future, I am going to be more dependent on technology because it has always been practical. I would love to live in a more 'digital' world.

Here is my attempt: A mí me importa mucho la tecnología. Además, al futuro, voy a depender más de la tecnología porque está siempre funcional. Me gustaría vivir en un mundo más digital.

I'm not a native speaker so I can't say that one would express it this way; however, if it were my assignment to write it, that is the way I would do so.