Proof-read 10 short sentences in Spanish

Question

Hello! Please proof-read if you find the time.

I don't need translation, I need the sentences to be checked if they are correct or not (in Spanish).

1) John cree en Dios.
2) John no se desayuna por las mañanas.
3) Si la luz esta apagada, John baja las escaleras.
4) John sube a el piso a pie.
5) John ama a su madre.
6) John se levanta a las doce los sábados.
7) John olvida ultimamente el telefono numero su abuela.
8) John ayuda a suf mamá y a su papá en casa
9) John lleva los libros, los bolígrafos y los lápizes en su mochila.
10) Sus padres llegan a casa a las cinco.

Thank you!

We do not do your homework for you , please make an attempt and we may correct them for you. - ray76, Oct 8, 2015

I will give you a vote for filling out your profile. - ray76, Oct 8, 2015

My teacher gave me 10 sentences that were in Estonian (my mother tongue) and asked us to translate them to Spanish. I did that according to what I had previously learned and with the help of Spanishdict, but I am not sure if translations are correct. - martenvaino, Oct 8, 2015

You've got the correct answers now. See my answer. You also get another vote on this post for filling out your profile. - Daniela2041, Oct 8, 2015

Answer 1

(2) Juan no desayuna por la mañana. (or las mañanas--without the por.) "Desayunar" is not reflexive.

(3) Si la luz está apagada John baja la escalera.

(4) Juan sube al piso a pie.

(7) John olvida últimamente el número de teléfono de su abuela.

(8) typo "suf"

(9) "lápices" ("z" changes to "c" before "e" or "i")

That's all I can find.

Buena suerte.

Thank you very much! - martenvaino, Oct 8, 2015

I just made an edit. There was a typo that I made. - Daniela2041, Oct 8, 2015

Answer 2

I do not need translations, I translated them from my own language to Spanish, but I would like corrections to be provided (I am not sure if the sentences are correct at the moment).

And we cannot be sure if they are correct until you provide the English translation. - ray76, Oct 8, 2015

They're correct now. - Daniela2041, Oct 8, 2015

And you get my vote for filling out your profile. Welcome to the family! - Daniela2041, Oct 8, 2015

Answer 3

Do you want these translated into English? Please provide more info. It would also be a wonderful idea to fill out your profile so that we know a little about you and what your level of Spanish is and also your English. We need to know this so we know at what level to respond, and in what language.

Also we are not a translation service. If you want these translated, you do the work as best as you can and we will provide corrections and explanations.

I just noticed that there are some errors in the Spanish.