Corrección de letra
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A ver si hay errores en la estrofa:
Querida Princesa Lora,
Me das pena de disfrutar el mundo como los demas,
Y siempre estoy en la soledad.
Encontraré la luz para brindar mi sendero de tu oscuridad.
Querida Princesa Lora,
Me aislas de las gentes que quieren ser mis amigos
Y me encarcelas cuando quiero aportar mis talentos.
Tomo esta oportunidad a darle voz a los que están sufriendo bajo tu control.
Querida Princesa Lora,
no sé si me estás protegiendo
o me estás castigando.
Te voy a ganar de todos modos.
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updated Aug 13, 2015
posted by joapr
We do not do your homework for you please add the English translation. - ray76, Aug 12, 2015
He is asking for a Proofreading, not homework. - rac1, Aug 12, 2015
However, adding the English will help us know what you are trying to say for sure. - rac1, Aug 12, 2015
He is having abad life.. but it's way out of my legue too. If I had seen the next two I would never have tried to correct the first one! - annierats, Aug 13, 2015
Solamente lo escribí en español. - joapr, Aug 13, 2015
Only wrote it in Spanish and it is not for a homework. It is my personal poetry. Hope I clarified. - joapr, Aug 13, 2015
1 Answer
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Bumping this up. Would someone like to help???
updated Aug 12, 2015
posted by rac1
I know this one is complicated, maybe a native speaker?? - rac1, Aug 12, 2015
