Is there anybody that can help me out with this text?
Hi everyone! I'm preparing this text for a book that is being developed and I need some help with it. I'm pretty conscious that is full of mistakes but I'm not aware what are those mistakes, I mean it doesn't sound right, fluent. If anyone can help me out I will be very happy!. Thanks in advance.
Foreword
The Oxbridge Superior of Police Studies, also known as OSPS has self-imposed the challenge to annually publish the present book dedicated to the compilation of criminalistic and criminologic studies that pretends to divulge knowledge based on police matters.
Every issue is the result of investigations of scientific nature that police officers and professionals with vast experience in the field of police investigation have made for the purpose to spread the abilities achieved.
This year we have invited foreign police to publish in the present book expanding the investigative police view enriching them of the experience of all of those that perform the noble work to attend the demands of the citizens and government authority in a professional way. The Police investigations of Oxbridge understands the importance of share empirical knowledge taking care of the idiosyncrasies of every brother nation. Because of this reason, the Oxbridge Superior of Police Studies intends to strengthen relations with other police department divisions understanding the relevance of the contributions of the different cultures in the professional exercise.
The mission of this school building is to educate the future leaders of the institution and it is estimate that the investigation is one of the fundamental pillars to develop the exercise of authority. Introjection and attention of knowledge from self experience or in a social learning way are the basis if is wanted to exert an effective leadership.
Therefore, it only remains to express gratitude to all of those that have contributed in the present edition sharing actions and knowledge, those that will contribute to the police exercise of Oxbrige investigators and the world.
1 Answer
I'll take a look at the first paragraph for you.
The Oxbridge Superior of Police Studies, also known as OSPS has self-imposed the challenge to annually publish the present book dedicated to the compilation of criminalistic and criminologic studies that pretends to divulge knowledge based on police matters.
Firstly, are you sure that the title is right? Oxbridge Superior of Police Studies - that doesn't sound right and google yields no information regarding that name or the OSPS acronmyn.
Rather than self-imposed you could say .... has taken it upon themselves to publish this book which is dedicated to ....
Do you really mean to say 'pretends'? That means it doesn't really do it, they just act like that's what they're doing, but they're not.
