Anyone check my grammar for me?
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It's a really short essay about my life after 20 years. Anyone please check my grammar especially my future tense?
Después de 20 años, amaré jugar con otros como hago ahora. Dirigiré mi propio hospital en ( ). Tendré cuidado de pacientes extranjeros ricos. Descansaré del trabajo siempre que quiera. Tendré una familia de cuatro, incluso mi marido, una hija y un hijo. Mi familia vivirá en una pequeña casa separada con la yarda en las afueras.
The blank- I just leaved it. Don't have to care 
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updated Jun 21, 2015
posted by ElenaCho
Welcome to the forum , we want to help you so fill out your profile If you have a problem PM a mod Bienvenido al foro. Queremos ayudarle, entonces hay que llenar su perfil. Si hay un problema, envíe un mensaje personal (PM) - ray76, Jun 21, 2015
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Welcome to SpanishDict. Please take a moment to complete your profile.
Add the English version of this so we can make sure of what you are trying to say.
updated Jun 21, 2015
posted by rac1
I know what she's trying to say, but in this case I won't help unless a profile gets filled in. Most of the mistakes are vocabulary. - Daniela2041, Jun 21, 2015
Once again it's a case of attempting to translate English idioms word for word into Spanish. - Daniela2041, Jun 21, 2015
Thanks, Dani. You are always so helpful. ♥♥ - rac1, Jun 21, 2015
