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Translate "I raised"

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Need assistance in translating the following:

I’m pleased the Legislature took a solid step forward in addressing many of the long-term issues I raised.

My Attempt: Estoy contento que la legislatura tomó un sólido paso adelante en tratando muchos de los problemas a largo plazo que traje a su atención

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updated Jun 9, 2015
posted by Bella2015
"En tratando" will not work, I would try "en tratar con", I wonder if is should be "problemas de largo", but I am not advanced enough to guarantee my suggestions. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
Also probably need to change to "contento de que la legislatura tomara". :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
I would say either "problemas a largo plazo", or "problemas a lo largo" - 005faa61, Jun 9, 2015
Gracias, Julian. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
Please put your answers in the answer box. Muchas gracias, amigo. - rac1, Jun 9, 2015
I just worry when I am not absolutely sure, and it is the first answer, that somebody who might be able to give a better answer will think it is already handled - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
Oh, ok...but I think you give awesome, correct answers. :):):) - rac1, Jun 9, 2015
When I think I can change a sentence to one that I am completely happy with I put an answer. When I see errors but am not sure what the best end result would be, I put comments. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
Case in point, the answer by geofc- which I think is more elegant and natural than my solution, although both are technically grammatically correct. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015

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I believe that I would simply leave out the "en" from "en tratando. I can remember, many years ago, wondering why my colleagues/friends/mentors never used it. My conclusion was that, even in English, it's difficult to determine what service or extra meaning it provides; is it, indeed, no more than a habit?. In Spanish it seems that it is less often used so, say I, get rid of it.

updated Jun 9, 2015
edited by geofc
posted by geofc
Good suggestion, I think that works nicely. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015
Good to see you, amigo. :) - rac1, Jun 9, 2015
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Thank you very much.

updated Jun 9, 2015
posted by Bella2015
De nada. just don't follow the suggestion that Julian nixed. :) - bosquederoble, Jun 9, 2015