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acerca de mi pasado

Hi lolanieta. Is this something you want proofread? - rac1, May 19, 2015

sí, espero que no te importa por favor - noena, May 19, 2015

Would you please add the English? - rac1, May 19, 2015

ibamos al parque . Jugar en el barro, perhaps, I don't quite know what your last sentence wants to say. Very good work. - annierats, May 19, 2015

Gracias annierats, . Yo i mi hermano mayor ibamos al parque a jugar con los amigos, jugaba con el barro y creaba cualquier cosa en barro - noena, May 19, 2015

We just wanted to make sure you got the correct translation. That's why we asked for the English. :) - rac1, May 19, 2015

I’m trying not to write it in English, my professor said that I should think directly in Spanish, but thanks so much… - noena, May 19, 2015

Answer 1

Mi familia siempre iba a la iglesia cuando era niña. Yo era miembro del coro de la iglesia católica en nuestra provincia. Veía dibujos animados por la tarde. Mi abuela cocinaba espagueti para nosotros, mientras veíamos televisión. Realmente me encantaba la forma en que ella cocinaba para nosotros. Mi hermano mayor y yo * íbamos al parque a jugar con los amigos. Me gustaba jugar con el barro (?) y creaba cualquier cosa con eso.

*Mi hermano mayor y yo

As a form of courtesy, you should always mention yourself at the end.

Luis, a typo: courtesy has only one 'S'. Saludos :) - FELIZ77, May 20, 2015

Maybe it should be Me gustaba jugar en el 'barrIO = neighbourhood! ;) - FELIZ77, May 20, 2015

I mean mud, - noena, May 20, 2015

okay, MeLinda... barro :) - FELIZ77, May 20, 2015

Gracias, Feliz! Saludos! - LuisCache, May 20, 2015

Answer 2

Hello Lola nieta,

Welcome to Spanishdict .

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I hope this helps

Gracias FELIZ77, I got the answer already!!! Dios los bendiga a todos!!! - noena, May 19, 2015

¡No hay de que, MeLinda :) - FELIZ77, May 20, 2015