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Homework?? - rac1, Jan 11, 2015

there is no english....i had to write about what and who i think is a hero or a role model:-) - 0012438c, Jan 11, 2015

Are you saying you wrote this but you don't know what it says? - rac1, Jan 11, 2015

I think Rac is saying that it would be good if you could please post a translation of your post so that any corrections stay true to what you wanted to say :) - Kiwi-Girl, Jan 11, 2015

WElcome to SD Sarah - where are you from? - ian-hill, Jan 11, 2015

Please fill out your profile so that we may better help you .Bienvenido al foro y buena suerte amigo - ray76, Jan 12, 2015

Answer 1

Sarah, I answered you and ask you to include the English. You don't open another post of the same thing. Add the English and we will help correct.

:) - ian-hill, Jan 11, 2015

Answer 2

Here are a few small corrections from the first para' ....

Dice que (no accent on que or it become 'what?')

De acuerdo 'con' not de

Mis padres son mis héroes Porque emigraron ...

Para conseguir una vida buena / mejor. (this may just be personal preference, yours is gramatically correct)

no 'Tiene' que ayudar 'a' la humanidad

Pero no obstante ... algo bueno de favor de una o más personas

Contribuyen (present tense)

Another option for 'some more, some less) could be 'algunos más, otros menos'

Upvoting without the reputation : ) - djwwalsh, Jan 11, 2015

Kiwi I love you old dag . but please wait untill the answer is given to the mod , otherwise you are negating what she is saying and white anting her. ;) - ray76, Jan 12, 2015

Kiwi, What are your thoughts on using the subjunctive in the follow: - djwwalsh, Jan 12, 2015

>>Un héroe para mi es alguien que no tener que ayudar la humanidad pero de todos modos hace algo buen para una o unos personas sin interés personal. - djwwalsh, Jan 12, 2015

Hey DJ no need for the subjunctive there :) - Kiwi-Girl, Jan 13, 2015

Nice. What was your reasoning? I could see it both ways - the case for subjunctive being that the hero is not a concrete, identifiable person. - djwwalsh, Jan 14, 2015

Answer 3

Hey Sarah! I'll kick off the discussion: I think you want to replace the "qué" in the first line with a "que" (i.e. remove the accent). The sentence calls for a basic relative pronoun not an interrogative prounoun : )

Please fill out your profile so that we may better help you .Bienvenido al foro y buena suerte amigo - ray76, Jan 12, 2015

Gracias por darme la bienvenida, Ray. - djwwalsh, Jan 12, 2015