Please correct my paragraph
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En el futuro, quiero vivir en un mundo perfecto- ¡Si yo fuera en pode, cambiaria todo y crearía un paraíso! ¡No sería pobreza, o desempleo, o adición; sería allí detener que desde de lo último! Todo el mundo tenería un casa y un educación buen… Porque no sería miedo que cambiar… ser radical. ¿Así que por favor, no me quiere ayudar fuga?
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updated Nov 26, 2014
posted by LightYagami
In this and your other paragraphs there are certain parts that don´t make sense, so I suggest that you include what you want to say in English as well - 005faa61, Nov 26, 2014
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Sorry, thought people might want to only do a small bit. Besides, this is due tomorrow. I have to learn it off by heart and it is 5:30pm now.
updated Nov 26, 2014
posted by LightYagami
Sorry about that amigo! I didn't realize each topic was different. :) I wish I could help you, but I don't know enough Spanish! Hopefully someone can help you :) - Unknownartist345, Nov 26, 2014
