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Mistakes in my sentences?

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Have I made any mistakes in my answers to these two questions? Thank you!

1) ¿Quieres visitar Puerto Rico? Explica tu respuesta.

Sí, quiero visitar Puerto Rico. Porque Puerto Rica tiene buenos hoteles. Quiero pasar el tiempo con mi familia en un hotel agradable. Podemos comer en el restaurante y nadamos en la piscina. Quiero visitar las playas de Puerto Rico, también. Mi familia le gusta la playa.

2) ¿Adónde quieres ir de vacaciones el verano que viene? Explica tu respuesta.

Quiero ir de vacaciones el verano que viene en Puerto Rico porque Puerto Rico tiene el tiempo bueno en el verano. Puedo tomar el sol, pasear en bicicleta, y visitar la playa.

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updated Nov 20, 2014
posted by SocialPanda
in the first answer, "nadar" not "nadamos" should be used. According to the sense of the sentence, "podemos" should be followed by the infinitives "comer" and " nadar." corrected sentence:"Podemos comer en el restaurante y nadar en la piscina." - lebysaul, Nov 19, 2014
Yep. - Daniela2041, Nov 19, 2014

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"A" mi familia le gusta la playa.

(It looks like your Spanish class is using the same book that I teach from.)

"tiempo bueno" is grammatically correct, but "buen tiempo" is used more. The rest of it looks pretty good. Although there some here that are a little more "picky-picky" than I am. I don't usually give my beginners un "mal rato" (That has nothing to do with rats. It means a "bad time."

updated Nov 20, 2014
posted by Daniela2041
Thank you. :) - SocialPanda, Nov 20, 2014
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in the first answer, "nadar" not "nadamos" should be used. According to the sense of the sentence, "podemos" should be followed by the infinitives "comer" and " nadar." corrected sentence:"Podemos comer en el restaurante y nadar en la piscina."

updated Nov 20, 2014
posted by lebysaul
I plead "ciega". I don't know how I missed that. Thanks. - Daniela2041, Nov 19, 2014
Thank you. Does this mean you always use infitive forms after a verb in a sentence? I thought since it wasn't directly after another verb, it should not be infinitive. - SocialPanda, Nov 20, 2014