assignment due tomorrow!!!!!
im not very good at construction of sentences in Spanish. i have a paragraph due tomorrow. how would i write- this past summer,i did alot of things. i went to Disney land, the beach, and San Francisco. in San Francisco, i walked the golden gate bridge, went to china town, and went down lumbard street.i also rode cable and trolley cars. a friend and i went to Disneyland for my birthday, rode every ride, and stayed till the park closed. we fell asleep on each other on the way back. we also went to see my moms side of the family. i introduced all my cousins to minecraft and call of duty. lastly i went to the beach, where my brother and i had a boogie boarding competition. we fell asleep on the way back, and laterer found out that my brother and dad got really bad sunburns.
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this past summer,i did alot of things. i went to Disney land, the beach, and San Francisco. in San Francisco, i walked the golden gate bridge, went to china town, and went down lumbard street.i also rode cable and trolley cars. a friend and i went to Disneyland for my birthday, rode every ride, and stayed till the park closed. we fell asleep on each other on the way back. we also went to see my moms side of the family. i introduced all my cousins to minecraft and call of duty. lastly i went to the beach, where my brother and i had a boogie boarding competition. we fell asleep on the way back, and laterer found out that my brother and dad got really bad sunburns.
You should do an effort to translate it by yourself, because it is a really really easy translation.
El pasado verano hice muchas cosas. Fui a Disneyland, a la playa y a San Francisco. En San Francisco, caminé por el puente Golden Gate, fui a China Town y recorrí la calle Lumbard. También monté en ¿teleférico?. Un amigo y yo fuimos a DIsneyland por mi cumpleaños y nos montamos en todas las atracciones hasta que el parque cerró. Nos dormimos ¿uno encima del otro? en el camino de vuelta. También fuimos a ver a mi familia materna. Enseñe a mis primos a jugar al Minecraft y Call of Duty. Por último fui a la playa, donde mi hermano y yo teniamos una competición de boogie boarding. Caimos rendidos en el camino de vuelta y algo después nos dimos cuenta de que mi hermano y mi padre se habian quemado mucho (Alternative ending 1:....padre tenían graves quemaduras solares)
Are you serious?? Depending on the level of Spanish you're studying, you need to stay within the limits of whatever vocabulary and grammar you know. None of my students would ever attempt such an effort unless they were in the extremely advanced class. If one of the native speakers here were to translate this for you and in correct Spanish, your teacher would probably fail you anyway. Some of mine have tried to submit things that they had their Latino friends do for them. I could tell from the advanced style, and in some cases the bad spelling that occurs among Latinos who have not studied formal Spanish. In my class you would get the grade of "Pobrecita" That's the Daniela way of saying "F"
Even your English needs work.
Make the sentences a little more understandable.
