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"Después, mi padre y yo fuimos de paseo mientras el deció los pisos de la experiencia con animales durante los vijós, salió mi mama detrás de una parrillada."

I tried to write; "Later, my father and i went for a walk while he told stories of his past experience with animals during camping trips, leaving my mother behind to create a barbeque."

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updated Nov 5, 2014
posted by slatkam

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I think that this sentence needs dots and comas to do it more "readable", but i have translated it as appears in your original post.

"Más tarde, mi padre y yo fuimos a dar un paseo, mientras me contaba historias sobre sus experiencias con los animales en los campings dejamos a mi madre preparando la barbacoa"

updated Nov 5, 2014
posted by txustaboy