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Please check and correct (if needed) the grammar!

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These are my answers for my Spanish homework over the weekend. Please check my grammar and correct anything wrong. Also, please correct any spelling errors and give me other ways I could say it, if possible. Gracias! Parte G Correct each false statement. 1. Original: Nos gusta practicar la plancha de vela cuando no hay viento y las olas son grandes. Correction: No nos gusta practicar la plancha de vela cuando no hay viento y las olas son grandes. 2. Original: Cuando tomamos el sol necesitamos usar el buceo. Correction: Cuando tomamos el sol necesitamos usar crema solar. 3. Original: Necesito una toalla antes de nadar en el mar. Correction: Necesito una toalla depúes de nadar en el mar. 4. Original: Necesitas una plancha de vela si vas a practicar el surfing. Correction: Necesitas una tabla hawaiana si vas a practicar el surfing. 5. Original: Los jugadores de voleibol juegan en el barquito. Correction: Los jugadores de voleibol juegan en una cancha de voleibol. Parte H (Please add anything you think I missed - gracias) Write as much as you can about a volleyball game. Me gusta voleibol, pero no soy buena. Hay seis jugadores en un equipo de voleibol. Hay dos equipos en cada juego. Ellos necesitan un balón y una red. Ellos juegan en una cancha de voleibol. Ellos llevan pantelones cortos, las zapatillas, los calcetines largos, y una camiseta.

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updated May 12, 2014
posted by bartholomew_bethany_chloe_either_rosa

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I was going to say welcome to the forum, but I see you have asked a number of questions. Has your Spanish level improved? Maybe you would now like to complete some of your profile. From the way you phrase your questions I assume you are a native English speaker and from the time of your questions you are not based in Europe. Completeing some of your profile shows you want to be part of the forum and gives people clues when answering your questions. A couple of things I have noticed are things I am sure you kow so perhaps you haven't read your answers carefully. eg Question 2 you have changed el buceo to crema soler - can you spot what is missing? In your final part about volleyball you keep repeating ellos - in English you would keep saying they but what have you been taught about the use of subject pronouns in Spanish?

updated May 12, 2014
edited by Mardle
posted by Mardle
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not much only a little about lo

updated May 12, 2014
posted by bartholomew_bethany_chloe_either_rosa