Build-a-Poem (for English learners)

Question

Vamos a construir un poema en inglés. Ahora, para que esto funcione, debe votar a la persona antes de que usted... y si se va a votar sobre otros, lo mejor es votar sobre todos.

El inglés tiene que rimar aquí, que no es necesariamente el Español

Sólo tienes que enviar una línea de un poema, (funny, serio, estúpido, lo que sea) y la siguiente persona se añadirá el siguiente, y así sucesivamente. En los próximos días, voy a someter a todos y, a continuación, podemos tratar de plasmar nuestra mano en su totalidad.

Por favor, no hay fotos.

Post en inglés, (en español, pero no es necesario)

Por favor, mantenga el contenido limpio.

Por favor corregir mi español

Go ahead girl! This is a great idea!! - rac1, Apr 23, 2014

thanks :) - actorgirl, Apr 23, 2014

Brilliant game! - 00ffada9, Apr 23, 2014

You are ahead of the game mate , well done. - ray76, Apr 24, 2014

Answer 1

The lavender fields were bathed in gold...

Answer 2

offering golden honey to the faraway bees

thanks for adding annie! - actorgirl, Apr 28, 2014

Answer 3

and it was truly a sight to behold.

Answer 4

The dew on the leaves sparkled like glass...

I am assuming that the rhyme lasts for 2 sentences, then it changes. Is that correct? - 00ffada9, Apr 23, 2014

yes, thank you. I was thinking about putting that in...it would be kind of weird if every line rhymed. :) - actorgirl, Apr 23, 2014

Answer 5

offering a sip to all that might pass...

Answer 6

And a heady perfume filled the air.

Answer 7

No place on Earth could compare.

Answer 8

A place of beauty, elegance and tranquility...

Answer 9

The peace felt here is beyond Man's ability.

Answer 10

The sun is shining through the mottled leaves...

Answer 11

rippling light like the waves on open seas...

Great twist! - 00ffada9, Apr 25, 2014

Answer 12

Forever saying, "I'm free, I'm free.

great way to end. thanks rac :) - actorgirl, Apr 29, 2014

Answer 13

Last call for any more lines for the poem! I am working on putting it all together, and it is a little bit incomplete. If no one else posts, I will finish it, but I thought I would bring it up again one last time to see if anyone had anything else. I will post the poem tomorrow then, unless it picks up again.

Answer 14

Here is the poem all together. Thank you so much to those of you who contributed. You did an awesome job! I think I may try this again sometime. If you want, you are welcome to translate this to Spanish and post it. Thanks again!

The lavender fields were bathed in gold,

and it was truly a sight to behold.

The dew on the leaves sparkled like glass,

offering a sip to all that might pass,

and a heady perfume filled the air,

no place on Earth could compare.

A place of beauty, elegance and tranquility,

the peace felt here is beyond Man's ability:

The sun is shining through the mottled leaves

rippling light like the waves on open seas,

offering golden honey to faraway bees,

Forever saying, “I'm free, I'm free."

Great poem! - rac1, Apr 29, 2014

thanks! :) It took me forever to think of it. :P lol - actorgirl, Apr 29, 2014