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Build-a-Poem (for Spanish learners)

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Let's build a poem in Spanish. Now, in order for this to work, you must vote on the person before you...and if you are going to vote on others, it is best to vote on them all.

The Spanish needs to rhyme here, not necessarily the English.

Just post one line of the poem, (funny, serious, stupid, whatever) and the next person will add the next and so on. In the next day or so, I will put it all together, and then we can try our hand at translating it as a whole.

Please no pictures.

Post in Spanish, (you can post in English too, but it is not necessary)

Please keep the content clean.

1318 views
updated Apr 30, 2014
edited by actorgirl
posted by actorgirl
good game actorgirl. - 007c5fc1, Apr 23, 2014
Great post mate , my vote. - ray76, Apr 24, 2014

12 Answers

4
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y ahora estamos aquí arrodilladas...

updated Apr 24, 2014
edited by 007c5fc1
posted by 007c5fc1
My knees are trembling. - ray76, Apr 24, 2014
4
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Mis pensamientos sobre ti son muchas...

updated Apr 24, 2014
posted by rac1
3
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Arodillado sobre la manta de picnic y sabiendo que . . .

updated Apr 24, 2014
edited by AnnRon
posted by AnnRon
3
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Me gusta magdalenas con hormigas dentro

updated Apr 24, 2014
posted by sasssySB
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....que se arrastran felizmente en el centro.

updated Apr 24, 2014
posted by Anrosia
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Y las hormigas no nos molestarán más.

updated Apr 30, 2014
posted by AnnRon
I sort of forgot that it's supposed to rhyme.Oops! I guess it's partly free verse at this point. - AnnRon, Apr 30, 2014
;) that's fine. :) - actorgirl, Apr 30, 2014
1
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Con esperanza, la ausencia de las hormigas y la gracia de dios.

updated Apr 30, 2014
posted by ray76
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Nuestra cercanía y el amor nos protegerán.

Y nuestra fe en el futuro

updated Apr 30, 2014
posted by ray76
1
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Desaparece, las hormigas; acercarse, mi amor.

updated Apr 30, 2014
posted by AnnRon
1
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Last call for any more lines for the poem! I am working on putting it all together, and it is a little bit incomplete. If no one else posts, I will finish it, but I thought I would bring it up again one last time to see if anyone had anything else. I will post the poem tomorrow then, unless it picks up again.

updated Apr 29, 2014
posted by actorgirl
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las hormigas son arrodilladas y todos los comé

updated Apr 24, 2014
posted by heliotropeman
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Y todas las hormigas huyen y se ahogaron en el río.

updated Apr 30, 2014
posted by rac1