Is this Spanish paragraph generally correct?
Mi colegio es en sureste Inglaterra se llama Fearnhill escuela. Que yo recuerde, he sabido es imprescindible que vayas a sus clases – mi madre siempre decía esta todo el tiempo! Siempre, yo voy a todos mi clases y lecciones – a mi modo de ver, yo estoy una estudiante buena!
Por este tiempo el año que viene, yo habré conducido todos de mi examines. yo habría aceptado los este año ya, pero cuando pequeño, me enferme y yo tuve saltarse escuela para una año entero – es por esa razón que para me, es muy importante estudiar mucho. Es un tema que ya me preocupa desde hace algún tiempo. Si yo tendré escuela, me despierto a las seis y media – dicho eso, me levanto a las seis porque mi cama tiene mucho caliente y es por esa razón que no quiero irme. Me sale en el autobús – yo había caminado a medio camino a mi colegio y me di cuenta de que ha estado lloviendo para cinco minutos! Había corrido a mi escuela - Es una ilusión creer que correr es divertido. Si tuviera que dar mi opinión, dirá que mi maestra de inglés me ayuda mucho, y es mi maestra preferida porque ella es una inspiración. Yo odio mucho al principio, pero ahora yo la quiero porque, además de ser muy guay, siempre hace las clases interesante.
Is this all correct? Any corrections?? More tenses or passive voice or idioms added would be great and highly appreciated. Thank you so much!!
1 Answer
This isn't bad. It can definitely be understood, but there are a few errors. They are all very minor though, and I think it would be better if you went back through yourself and tried to find them.
Hint: Most of them are structure of sentence errors.
Here is what the paragraph translates into---
My school is in Southeast England called Fearnhill school. That I can remember, I've known is necessary that you go to their classes - my mother always said this all the time! Always, I'm going to all my classes and lessons - in my view, I am a good student! By this time the coming year, I have led all of my exams. I would have accepted the East year already, but when small, make me sick and I had to skip school for a year whole - that's why to me, is very important to study hard. It is a theme that already worries me for some time. If I have school, I wake up at half past six - saying that, I get up at six because my bed has very hot and is for that reason that I don't want to go. I get on the bus - I walked half way to my college and I realized that it has been raining for five minutes! He had run at my school - is an illusion to believe that running is fun. If I were to give my opinion, I will say that my English teacher helps me a lot, and is my favorite teacher because she is an inspiration. I hate very much at the beginning, but now I want it because, besides being very cool, it always makes interesting classes.
See if you can correct the small errors.
Buena Suerta
