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Please,need a grammar check

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We both like bicycles and we ride them together. This is a sentence written by neighbor's kid for school. Teacher gave him B because of that line.Crashing the word "both" ,saying that its grammatically incorrect.

Can someone elaborate,please?

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updated Nov 26, 2013
posted by IceLancer

7 Answers

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Technically, all prepositions should be followed by objective pronouns. Tell your teacher to check on it because this native English speaker says your friend's sentence sounds right.

It could be a regional difference or technically incorrect grammar. I wouldn't make judgements until the teacher comments on why.

updated Nov 26, 2013
posted by HackerKing
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I am not a grammar expert but the sentence is very normal usage. I suspect that the teacher is thinking that the we is sufficient but I disagree. "We" can express two or twenty so the both qualifies the "we" as just being two.

I would say it exactly like the sentence presented.

The teacher may be looking for "Both of us like bicycles,.....

updated Nov 1, 2013
edited by gringojrf
posted by gringojrf
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The sentence is very correct.Its common to hear "we both" or "we all" in contemporary English.

updated Nov 1, 2013
posted by osas-baby
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I don't understand.Teacher is not English native,alright.But to flank a grade because of that?And yet being grammatically correct ,on what grounds? Should i tell to neighbor to confront teacher about that?

updated Nov 1, 2013
posted by IceLancer
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Nothing wrong with ' both'. It would sound better to say ' we both like riding our bicycles together, or, we like bicycling together', but I can't see any reason whatsoever not to use ' both' . Ambos, los dos!

updated Nov 26, 2013
edited by annierats
posted by annierats
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no me gustan la leche

updated Nov 26, 2013
posted by Olurani
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Another factor to consider is where you are learning English.

What may be correct in the U.S. is not always so in Canada, the neighboring country.

This is common among English-speaking countries, where slight differences stick out like sore thumbs. I'm sure it's the same for U.K., Scotland, and Ireland, not to mention Australia and New Zealand, to name a few.

updated Nov 1, 2013
posted by SaigeSmith